Schmekel and Clekel McGee
A funny poem82 total reviews
Comment from Wendy Jungbauer
I love this poem! It's quirky and fun, and reminds me of Dr. Suess. I find myself drawn to the characters and would love to read more about their adventures. As an actress, I enjoy reciting poems and this one made me laugh out loud, especially when "Freckle got cotton candy stuck in his hair." Great job and I look forward to reading more of your poems.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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I love this poem! It's quirky and fun, and reminds me of Dr. Suess. I find myself drawn to the characters and would love to read more about their adventures. As an actress, I enjoy reciting poems and this one made me laugh out loud, especially when "Freckle got cotton candy stuck in his hair." Great job and I look forward to reading more of your poems.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Lol! Well, thank you Wendy. It was supposed to be a fun poem and designed to make you laugh! Thank you for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Thesis
You achieved the funny poem. It was quite light and left the reader to imagine these three characters in action. It was quite an enjoyable read. Poor dog didn't get the bone.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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You achieved the funny poem. It was quite light and left the reader to imagine these three characters in action. It was quite an enjoyable read. Poor dog didn't get the bone.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Well, thank you Thesis. I appreciate your review!
Comment from Earl Corp
This should have been a contest entry, It rhymed, made sense and was hilarious.It kind of reminded me of Bill Schott's work. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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This should have been a contest entry, It rhymed, made sense and was hilarious.It kind of reminded me of Bill Schott's work. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Thank you Earl!
Comment from F. William Lester
This brought a smile to my face and gave my day a proper beginning. I must admit, the title caught my attention, but not for the reasons put forth in your poetry. The silliness lightened my day. Thanks for sharing it. Be well.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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This brought a smile to my face and gave my day a proper beginning. I must admit, the title caught my attention, but not for the reasons put forth in your poetry. The silliness lightened my day. Thanks for sharing it. Be well.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Well, good William. Then I have succeeded if I made you laugh! Thank you for your review. I appreciate that!
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My pleasure. Have a great day.
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This poem meets the humorous goal perfectly. I like that it has a rhyme scheme as well. Good job with this poem. Thanks for sharing and good luck with future writing. Happy writing!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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This poem meets the humorous goal perfectly. I like that it has a rhyme scheme as well. Good job with this poem. Thanks for sharing and good luck with future writing. Happy writing!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much Lindsey. I appreciate your review!
Comment from talented150
I simply loved your funny poem. You introduced us to each person and their dog and led us through their activities which was fun. I loved your choice of names and your contrasts between each character. So fun! Please write more.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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I simply loved your funny poem. You introduced us to each person and their dog and led us through their activities which was fun. I loved your choice of names and your contrasts between each character. So fun! Please write more.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Well, thank you so much! I really appreciate that!
Comment from patcelaw
This indeed is if unemployment was very interesting to listen to. It moves along very well when it is read aloud I enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful evening and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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This indeed is if unemployment was very interesting to listen to. It moves along very well when it is read aloud I enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful evening and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Thank you again Patricia! I really appreciate your reviews!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh Harry, what a fun poem. In a time when there is just so much hate and loss that it was very good to find a bit of levity. Now, I'm not saying there isn't a place for angst and melancholy. for sure, there is, but once in a while, just have a good time, right?
Thanks for sharing.
Rhonda
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Oh Harry, what a fun poem. In a time when there is just so much hate and loss that it was very good to find a bit of levity. Now, I'm not saying there isn't a place for angst and melancholy. for sure, there is, but once in a while, just have a good time, right?
Thanks for sharing.
Rhonda
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Yes ma'am. And that is what this poem is supposed to do. Make you laugh a little...Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is a fast yet fun read that cannot help but put a smile on your reader's face -- Where did you come up with those names? :-) Thanx so much for the light-hearted grin today!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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This is a fast yet fun read that cannot help but put a smile on your reader's face -- Where did you come up with those names? :-) Thanx so much for the light-hearted grin today!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Lol! Yes, it was supposed to be funny and the words just came to me one day so I wrote them down. Thank you for your review. I really appreciate it!
Comment from Sanku
Yeah No doubt it wasa funny poem . You have cleverly thought out two striking names for the dogs . You have also taken us through the fairgrounds so that our childhood memories were stirred ...Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Yeah No doubt it wasa funny poem . You have cleverly thought out two striking names for the dogs . You have also taken us through the fairgrounds so that our childhood memories were stirred ...Well done.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Lol! Well, thank you Sanku. I really appreciate your review!
