The Squeaky Staircase
contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
I don't normally care for free verse, but this poem with its almost stream-of-consciousness description and interjected daydreams about its past really painted such a lovely picture. It reminded me of when I bought my first house. It did have stairs, but there weren't nearly as pretty as the ones in this poem!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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I don't normally care for free verse, but this poem with its almost stream-of-consciousness description and interjected daydreams about its past really painted such a lovely picture. It reminded me of when I bought my first house. It did have stairs, but there weren't nearly as pretty as the ones in this poem!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you
Comment from bonespur
This seems to be a good candidate for the contest. I like the way your story's staircase had a history, and all those involved. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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This seems to be a good candidate for the contest. I like the way your story's staircase had a history, and all those involved. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you
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You're welcome
Comment from jessizero
This was a very interesting piece about a staircase. It was very creative and well-told. I think this was a great take on the prompt. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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This was a very interesting piece about a staircase. It was very creative and well-told. I think this was a great take on the prompt. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you