The pond
Ducks by a pond2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how with just a few words you share a moment with the old man feeding the ducks by the pond. The imagery is wonderfully calming. There's a gentle charm in the simplicity of the scene.
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I love how with just a few words you share a moment with the old man feeding the ducks by the pond. The imagery is wonderfully calming. There's a gentle charm in the simplicity of the scene.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi K.J.King
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.
It's very difficult to review these tiny poems because since they are so tiny, they can't say very much
Yours is nice nice vision nice image
I always liked feeding ducks by the pond. We'd feed them bread, crumbs or rather pieces of bread
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi K.J.King
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.
It's very difficult to review these tiny poems because since they are so tiny, they can't say very much
Yours is nice nice vision nice image
I always liked feeding ducks by the pond. We'd feed them bread, crumbs or rather pieces of bread
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
