A Typical Day
A most peaceful sight3 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
This haiku is descriptive of nature and follows the 5-7-5 syllable format. It is very lovely in that it has a philosophical statement in the last line.
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This haiku is descriptive of nature and follows the 5-7-5 syllable format. It is very lovely in that it has a philosophical statement in the last line.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from jessizero
This 5-7-5 on nature was lovely. I liked the mental image you painted with your words, and the actual picture you used added to it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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This 5-7-5 on nature was lovely. I liked the mental image you painted with your words, and the actual picture you used added to it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your kind words of encouragement.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought your poem beautifully captured the difference between morning and night. For me I felt a link with the natural beauty of the sun with a spiritual presence. I love that. Great job!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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I thought your poem beautifully captured the difference between morning and night. For me I felt a link with the natural beauty of the sun with a spiritual presence. I love that. Great job!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your review, Michael. I am thrilled you got a blessing from it too.