Winter's Wonderous Chill
What I think winter looks like.3 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
What a lovely haiku. I'm puzzled by the comment "what I think winter looks like." As if the poet has not seen snow before? Well, surprisingly if that's the case, the poet still managed to convey the vision of a snowy icy landscape to me! (And it rhymes, which I love!)
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What a lovely haiku. I'm puzzled by the comment "what I think winter looks like." As if the poet has not seen snow before? Well, surprisingly if that's the case, the poet still managed to convey the vision of a snowy icy landscape to me! (And it rhymes, which I love!)
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from nancy Laine
Nicely done. Encapsulates winter in a positive light. I am not a fan of the season but this poem actually makes winter more appealing. Thanks for sharing.
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Nicely done. Encapsulates winter in a positive light. I am not a fan of the season but this poem actually makes winter more appealing. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!
That's a pretty good description of winter that you've penned This can be considered a haiku also. You could've entered into the haiku contest but it's also a 575 prom so that's great.
I like your skies, spitting.snow. That is a very good visual
Overall, your poem is excellentP
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!
That's a pretty good description of winter that you've penned This can be considered a haiku also. You could've entered into the haiku contest but it's also a 575 prom so that's great.
I like your skies, spitting.snow. That is a very good visual
Overall, your poem is excellentP
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
