The Private Life Of Winds
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Comment from zanya
Yes this short format poem reflects on the power of wind and how it interacts in a variety of ways with weather patterns - it's an interesting angle on the wind and its impact.
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Yes this short format poem reflects on the power of wind and how it interacts in a variety of ways with weather patterns - it's an interesting angle on the wind and its impact.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
That was interesting. I have seen yet another side to you. I have seen religious, spiritual, western, sci- fi, romantic, nature based, hoity toity, silly, smarty smart, and now I see complaintive. You are a conumdrum, wrapped inside an enigma.
My kinda guy. Good work. Karen
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That was interesting. I have seen yet another side to you. I have seen religious, spiritual, western, sci- fi, romantic, nature based, hoity toity, silly, smarty smart, and now I see complaintive. You are a conumdrum, wrapped inside an enigma.
My kinda guy. Good work. Karen
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from shelley kaye
love the second and third line
just not sure about "winds" and "breeze" in the first line
since they are essentially the same thing
maybe...
Winds dance with fall leaves
Cry in frigid pelting rain
And laugh in flowers
then again it could be just me
random though i had while reading
nice nature 575...
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
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love the second and third line
just not sure about "winds" and "breeze" in the first line
since they are essentially the same thing
maybe...
Winds dance with fall leaves
Cry in frigid pelting rain
And laugh in flowers
then again it could be just me
random though i had while reading
nice nature 575...
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024