If flowers could dance
What a sight.36 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely whimsical poem and what a delight it would indeed be if flowers could dance and chase away the doom and gloom, the loneliness that we at times feel. Loved this one, Willie,
cheers,
valda
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This is a lovely whimsical poem and what a delight it would indeed be if flowers could dance and chase away the doom and gloom, the loneliness that we at times feel. Loved this one, Willie,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Willie,
What a sweet, lyrical poem!
Nice repeating phrase and excellent imagery.
Excellent romantic poem.
You may be older Willie, but you have a young heart.
All hopeless romantics can relate to your work.
Best wishes, Willie,
Cindy
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Willie,
What a sweet, lyrical poem!
Nice repeating phrase and excellent imagery.
Excellent romantic poem.
You may be older Willie, but you have a young heart.
All hopeless romantics can relate to your work.
Best wishes, Willie,
Cindy
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from Nicki.B
Oh but Willie flowers have danced many a time for you too! A beautiful poem of romance portrayed through the natural beauty of flowers. The presentation is lovely with the swirling font and fun artwork.
Well done, delightful!
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Oh but Willie flowers have danced many a time for you too! A beautiful poem of romance portrayed through the natural beauty of flowers. The presentation is lovely with the swirling font and fun artwork.
Well done, delightful!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. I seldom read poetry, and only like rhyming poems. So, you caught my attention with your profile and I thoroughly enjoyed your poem.
Thanks for sharing.
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As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. I seldom read poetry, and only like rhyming poems. So, you caught my attention with your profile and I thoroughly enjoyed your poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your poem creates a delightful and whimsical image of flowers dancing, capturing a sense of enchantment and joy. The idea of flowers as dancers is charming and imaginative, and you've effectively conveyed a sense of wonder and longing.
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Your poem creates a delightful and whimsical image of flowers dancing, capturing a sense of enchantment and joy. The idea of flowers as dancers is charming and imaginative, and you've effectively conveyed a sense of wonder and longing.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from TPAC
I love your structured write, finding a deep poetic formation, creating a smooth course of defined events. A super plus, in my given opinion: prevailing this particular read.
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I love your structured write, finding a deep poetic formation, creating a smooth course of defined events. A super plus, in my given opinion: prevailing this particular read.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is a little different from your usual fare, Willie, but it's sweet and uncomplicated and insouciant. It also presents well with the font you chose. I'm glad I had the chance to enjoy this today. xo
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This is a little different from your usual fare, Willie, but it's sweet and uncomplicated and insouciant. It also presents well with the font you chose. I'm glad I had the chance to enjoy this today. xo
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from Katiemae1977
That would be something to see indeed.
This is a charming poem with good strong rhymes and an inventive subject matter. I can only imagine how wonderful it would smell!
Well done!
I throughly enjoyed it!
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That would be something to see indeed.
This is a charming poem with good strong rhymes and an inventive subject matter. I can only imagine how wonderful it would smell!
Well done!
I throughly enjoyed it!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from June Sargent
Well, they must be dancing for you - because you have painted a delightful portrait of them with your words! It was a wonderful read that brightened my day. Thank you for sharing a bit of joy.
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Well, they must be dancing for you - because you have painted a delightful portrait of them with your words! It was a wonderful read that brightened my day. Thank you for sharing a bit of joy.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from Jacob1395
I loved the rhyme in your piece which was so engaging, for me, and I thought the imagery was really nice in your piece. It reminded me almost of a children's nursery rhyme as I was reading. I enjoyed reading it.
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I loved the rhyme in your piece which was so engaging, for me, and I thought the imagery was really nice in your piece. It reminded me almost of a children's nursery rhyme as I was reading. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
