Patch and Ruby
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Patch and Ruby Fix Helen's Mews "Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is Kenzie's cat
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Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a lovely story of two cats who lost their way and then found it again. I love how they seem to not know what they didn't know and then in time they came to clarity and I have found in my life that food always does that. If you're going through a challenging time you just need some good food.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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This is a lovely story of two cats who lost their way and then found it again. I love how they seem to not know what they didn't know and then in time they came to clarity and I have found in my life that food always does that. If you're going through a challenging time you just need some good food.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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LOL, You are kinda close, but actually Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is my granddaughters. When Patch overheard Helen say her muse was broke, she thought it was a cat thing and it was pronounced mews. Long story short they thought they fixed the mews and that they saved the day. LOL...
i just appreciate your fun try at it and for the awesome stars. You are the best and you even tried to figure it out. What a guy! Thanks again, Bro. Love Debi
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Not feeling well. I wrote your thank you for this and it disappeared before. I'm on a new machine and hoping that will make a difference. You may see this again.
Comment from Neonewman
Mews for a muse, clever young lady. I love the artwork paired with this well-crafted, fun piece. You never let your fans down, Debi. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Mews for a muse, clever young lady. I love the artwork paired with this well-crafted, fun piece. You never let your fans down, Debi. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Hahahaha, Thanks so much, Steve. I love your sense of humor and I love your kind comments even more. Thanks and they mean a lot to me.
Love, Debi
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Always a pleasure, Debi.
Comment from Terry wrote
Such a clever poem. Of course, I chose to read this one because I saw the KItty in the image, and was pleased to read of her efforts in saving the poet's 'muse' in the best was she could ... nourishment no doubt always works to restore our muses. Thanks for a happy read!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Such a clever poem. Of course, I chose to read this one because I saw the KItty in the image, and was pleased to read of her efforts in saving the poet's 'muse' in the best was she could ... nourishment no doubt always works to restore our muses. Thanks for a happy read!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Hi Terry, and thank you for this fun review and comments. I love to see so many having fun with these silly cats. Thanks again, my friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Terry Broxson
Debi, I couldn't pass this one up. LOL, I do love the muse, mews! And, of course, I'm a sucker for a good cat story. This is a good cat story disguised as a cat poem. Very well done. Terry.
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Debi, I couldn't pass this one up. LOL, I do love the muse, mews! And, of course, I'm a sucker for a good cat story. This is a good cat story disguised as a cat poem. Very well done. Terry.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
Comment from Janet Foor
A fun poem Debi and I'm sure it was fun to write about the playful antics of Helen's sweet kittens. Nice imagery and a sweet picture too.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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A fun poem Debi and I'm sure it was fun to write about the playful antics of Helen's sweet kittens. Nice imagery and a sweet picture too.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Hi Janet, I should probably give more info in author's notes to tell that Ruby is my Kenzie's cat. It all started after Helen used to write about when the moved how Patch hated it. Then Kenzie had to move and she told me her cat was acting out. So was born my first story about them trying to stop Kenzies move. And the weird thing is she decided not to move at that time after all.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, my sweet friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice photo and presentation, Debi.
-They look like contented cats.
-You did a good job with the poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the word play on mews.
-It is also clever how they try
to figure out what a mews is.
-A good line about age and
her head being blank.
-Then they discover the best
thing to do is go to Amazon
and problem is solved.
-Hope it helps Helen's mews!
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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-Nice photo and presentation, Debi.
-They look like contented cats.
-You did a good job with the poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the word play on mews.
-It is also clever how they try
to figure out what a mews is.
-A good line about age and
her head being blank.
-Then they discover the best
thing to do is go to Amazon
and problem is solved.
-Hope it helps Helen's mews!
-Very well done.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Hi Pam, I should probably give more info in author's notes to tell that Ruby is my Kenzie's cat. It all started after Helen used to write about when the moved how Patch hated it. Then Kenzie had to move and she told me her cat was acting out. So was born my first story about them trying to stop Kenzies move. And the weird thing is she decided not to move at that time after all.
You are the first person to get the fun I had with rubbing in age and talked about a body part that lapsed, LOL. Thank you for getting that. Even tho, Helen is two years younger than me, she still laughed. Haha.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, my sweet friend. Love, Debi
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I remember the initial poems, Debi. I'm honored to have been the first person to get it. It was a fun poem and I love plays on words and puns!
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You are amazing!
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So are you😊
Comment from karenina
This is adorable! I'm SURE Helen would LOVE the "meow mix" -- oh wait...I'm sure those helpful kitties would LOVE Helen serving it to them!
Cute play of "mews" and "muse" and you ran with it! Great AABB rhyme and your always light and inspiring content may well wake my "mews" up one of these days!
Karenina
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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This is adorable! I'm SURE Helen would LOVE the "meow mix" -- oh wait...I'm sure those helpful kitties would LOVE Helen serving it to them!
Cute play of "mews" and "muse" and you ran with it! Great AABB rhyme and your always light and inspiring content may well wake my "mews" up one of these days!
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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I am so glad you liked this one, K. I am always tickled when people like these that are a little far fetched. But Patch and Ruby are hoping to get their own show someday. Haha.
Thanks for the awesome comments, my sweet friend, love, Debi
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This was an amusing read Debi, particularly after having read Helen's sign story about how clever her cats are, now you have confirmed it (LOL) I like the different muse, mews, meows throughout. Very clever and good fun.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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This was an amusing read Debi, particularly after having read Helen's sign story about how clever her cats are, now you have confirmed it (LOL) I like the different muse, mews, meows throughout. Very clever and good fun.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Hi Valda, and thank you for this fun review and comments. I love to see so many having fun with these silly cats. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Cute!!! Your poem is charming and playful, capturing a fun and whimsical story. It flows smoothly and effectively conveys the humorous situation. The characters and their interactions are engaging and add to the overall enjoyment of the piece.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Cute!!! Your poem is charming and playful, capturing a fun and whimsical story. It flows smoothly and effectively conveys the humorous situation. The characters and their interactions are engaging and add to the overall enjoyment of the piece.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Hi Patty, and thank you for this fun review and comments. I love to see so many having fun with these silly cats. Thanks again, my friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from jessizero
I loved this fun little poem! This was adorable, and I loved your rhymes (as always). This was the perfect solution to the problem!!! Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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I loved this fun little poem! This was adorable, and I loved your rhymes (as always). This was the perfect solution to the problem!!! Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Oh, Jessi, I am tickled that you like this silly story that I write. This is the third one and will be writing more here and there as Helen loves them too. I thank you for the fun review and I really appreciate the six for the fix. LOL. You are so awesome, my sweet friend. Lotsa love and hugs, Debi