2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 63 "Shine On"*
9 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very neat cinquain poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very neat imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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This is a very neat cinquain poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very neat imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Teri
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Every child should be raised in such a way that they know they are a special diamond in God's eyes. Yes, we are all children of God. Thank you for sharing this wonderful reminder as a contest entry. I enjoyed the entire presentation. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Every child should be raised in such a way that they know they are a special diamond in God's eyes. Yes, we are all children of God. Thank you for sharing this wonderful reminder as a contest entry. I enjoyed the entire presentation. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Though I see the book and the basket, I immediately thought of the womb. Then to be born with the hope and potential to shape our world for the better. Very well written, illustrated and presented Cinquain - 2/4/6/8/2 poem. Go luck in the contest.
RJ
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Though I see the book and the basket, I immediately thought of the womb. Then to be born with the hope and potential to shape our world for the better. Very well written, illustrated and presented Cinquain - 2/4/6/8/2 poem. Go luck in the contest.
RJ
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
The sweetest tribute to the innocence and beauty of a child. I enjoyed the repeat of the words: "shine on" which neatly encapsulate the succinct expansion of the verse within. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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The sweetest tribute to the innocence and beauty of a child. I enjoyed the repeat of the words: "shine on" which neatly encapsulate the succinct expansion of the verse within. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from BethShelby
Nice cinquain, beautifully illustrate. Children should be encouraged to shine. They are our future and God loves all of them. I wish they could all grow up in loving homes.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Nice cinquain, beautifully illustrate. Children should be encouraged to shine. They are our future and God loves all of them. I wish they could all grow up in loving homes.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
pink floyd is cool!
this was a great cinquain
perfect syllable count with smooth flow
deeply thought-provoking and moving
cool pic of the little girl on her bed
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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pink floyd is cool!
this was a great cinquain
perfect syllable count with smooth flow
deeply thought-provoking and moving
cool pic of the little girl on her bed
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Loved this sweet message to a child - all children are precious to God. Beautiful presentation and I liked how you echoed the first line in the last line. Best wishes in the contest!!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Loved this sweet message to a child - all children are precious to God. Beautiful presentation and I liked how you echoed the first line in the last line. Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review , big sister. Have a happy weekend.
Love ❤️
Marival
Comment from royowen
An excellent cinquain Gypsy. You are absolutely, I'm amazed by God's loving heart, I've decided I have no understanding of those particular depths of God's heart, especially for these little ones, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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An excellent cinquain Gypsy. You are absolutely, I'm amazed by God's loving heart, I've decided I have no understanding of those particular depths of God's heart, especially for these little ones, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was mesmerizing. My mind went from thinking about being called a little diamond, to calling someone special little diamond. There are some people who shine brightly around us. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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This was mesmerizing. My mind went from thinking about being called a little diamond, to calling someone special little diamond. There are some people who shine brightly around us. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs