Follow The Beat
Personalities following their own beat.2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
Your syllable count and subject matter were spot-on for the prompt. I liked the picture you chose to accompany this poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Your syllable count and subject matter were spot-on for the prompt. I liked the picture you chose to accompany this poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I like it! It states a universal truth. You could've said that each beats his own drum. But what you have is fine
You're basically saying that each person is unique and you're giving examples of two different types of people
I hope I'm the kind that has an open mind
It should be each has a drum Each is a singular subject. It is in both your poem and your notes
Actually saying their for a singular noun is also not correct. He/his/him is normally used.
So
each has his own drum
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I like it! It states a universal truth. You could've said that each beats his own drum. But what you have is fine
You're basically saying that each person is unique and you're giving examples of two different types of people
I hope I'm the kind that has an open mind
It should be each has a drum Each is a singular subject. It is in both your poem and your notes
Actually saying their for a singular noun is also not correct. He/his/him is normally used.
So
each has his own drum
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024