2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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18 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Marival,
This is a strong use of eight words to describe metaphorically and with personification what happens when it rains. I like the colorful word.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Hi Marival,
This is a strong use of eight words to describe metaphorically and with personification what happens when it rains. I like the colorful word.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much.
Have a wonderful weekend ☺️
Gypsy ❤️
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Don't mention it, Marival.
Thanks.
Joan
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I went to college in Nebraska, and oh! how this photo evokes memories of that landscape! There were lots and lots of times when the sky looked like that, too, and people were happy because it had been so dry for so long. Very well done poem, Gypsy. Good luck in the contest! xo
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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I went to college in Nebraska, and oh! how this photo evokes memories of that landscape! There were lots and lots of times when the sky looked like that, too, and people were happy because it had been so dry for so long. Very well done poem, Gypsy. Good luck in the contest! xo
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle, I appreciate you going back to my old posts
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
You did a great job with this poem, Gypsy. I mentioned in a review to one whose comments mentioned your inadvertent help that you're the best to teach haiku. I should have said you're the best in Japanese poetry of any kind!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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You did a great job with this poem, Gypsy. I mentioned in a review to one whose comments mentioned your inadvertent help that you're the best to teach haiku. I should have said you're the best in Japanese poetry of any kind!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Verna
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
This poem painted such a picture. I saw a field, dry and drought stricken, then a start of a breeze. The signal of rain. They fat wet drops being absorbed by the ground. Plants dancing under the pattering of drops. Beautiful written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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This poem painted such a picture. I saw a field, dry and drought stricken, then a start of a breeze. The signal of rain. They fat wet drops being absorbed by the ground. Plants dancing under the pattering of drops. Beautiful written. Gretchen
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Yes, dry feeds would be so happy to get any rain at all. I know in Texas we get joyful when it rains. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
You should get your book on 8/21/24.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Yes, dry feeds would be so happy to get any rain at all. I know in Texas we get joyful when it rains. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
You should get your book on 8/21/24.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Thank you! I can't wait.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Neonewman
The waves of grain appreciate the weeping clouds. I love play on words, and this one captured the sensitive side of a storm. Great job, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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The waves of grain appreciate the weeping clouds. I love play on words, and this one captured the sensitive side of a storm. Great job, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice images and presentation, Gypsy.
-You have used your eight words well with a good topic.
-A very good opening line personifying the sky.
-The dry fields are grateful for the sky opening
up to provide much needed rain.
-A very good concluding line with
effective use of alliteration.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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-Nice images and presentation, Gypsy.
-You have used your eight words well with a good topic.
-A very good opening line personifying the sky.
-The dry fields are grateful for the sky opening
up to provide much needed rain.
-A very good concluding line with
effective use of alliteration.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This eight-word poem, Sky Weeps, has the proper formatting and allows that the dried-out grains may still be saved when the clouds finally get misty.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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This eight-word poem, Sky Weeps, has the proper formatting and allows that the dried-out grains may still be saved when the clouds finally get misty.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and it has a very nice flow to it. Your presentation is beautiful. I wish the sky would weep over our land here in Phoenix, Arizona, Arizona as we are extremely dry and are needing to have some weeping sky. Patricia.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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This is very well written and it has a very nice flow to it. Your presentation is beautiful. I wish the sky would weep over our land here in Phoenix, Arizona, Arizona as we are extremely dry and are needing to have some weeping sky. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
this was a cool little 8-word poem about an arid land finally getting rain...
great imagery and smooth flow
i like the sky weeps gratefulness
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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this was a cool little 8-word poem about an arid land finally getting rain...
great imagery and smooth flow
i like the sky weeps gratefulness
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊