Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Terry gets suspended"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, your writing really pulled me in! The tension is so well written, and the characters feel incredibly real. I was completely captivated by Terry's determination and the way you build the suspense around her investigation. I can't wait to see where this story goes--it's definitely a page-turner!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Wow, your writing really pulled me in! The tension is so well written, and the characters feel incredibly real. I was completely captivated by Terry's determination and the way you build the suspense around her investigation. I can't wait to see where this story goes--it's definitely a page-turner!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Oh thank you for your review! Please continue reading.
Comment from patcelaw
And I enjoyed listening to it very very well and it reads well when it is read out loud. You have good sentence structure, good paragraphing and your overall presentation is very good. Patricia.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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And I enjoyed listening to it very very well and it reads well when it is read out loud. You have good sentence structure, good paragraphing and your overall presentation is very good. Patricia.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Patricia I always look forward to your reviews!