Diva
She devil...2 total reviews
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your passage does a great job of showcasing the narrator's confidence and manipulative skills. The way you describe their awareness of their own power is intriguing and gives a strong sense of their character. The phrases like "predatory practices" and "womanly wiles" really capture their self-assuredness and mastery.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Your passage does a great job of showcasing the narrator's confidence and manipulative skills. The way you describe their awareness of their own power is intriguing and gives a strong sense of their character. The phrases like "predatory practices" and "womanly wiles" really capture their self-assuredness and mastery.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Patty.
Comment from Lindsey Russell
Wow! This is an amazing 100 word story. It proves all people have some sort of power. What matters is how we decide to use it. Good luck with the contest and happy writing.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Wow! This is an amazing 100 word story. It proves all people have some sort of power. What matters is how we decide to use it. Good luck with the contest and happy writing.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Lindsey.