Budding Feelings
Atom poem. Potlatch Club27 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Secrets, that's why pansies have the look on their faces. I enjoyed this wonderfully crafted piece you offered about the meaning of the bud. Best of luck in the contest.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
Secrets, that's why pansies have the look on their faces. I enjoyed this wonderfully crafted piece you offered about the meaning of the bud. Best of luck in the contest.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
-
Thanks, Steve, for the encouraging words and all the stars.
Jon
-
My pleasure.
Comment from Sarah Sandison
I like poems that make me think and often the poems with fewer words make me think more. I like the picture that you chose and I love the way your words flow :)
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
I like poems that make me think and often the poems with fewer words make me think more. I like the picture that you chose and I love the way your words flow :)
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
-
Thanks for all the positive remarks about the poem and the artwork.
Joan
Comment from Aussie
I did enjoy the meanings of the flowers. Much in the same vein are jewels have meaning i.e amethyst for peace, love and protection. As a child, we used to fire the heads of daisies at our classmates. Mother Nature would not have been happy. K xx
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
I did enjoy the meanings of the flowers. Much in the same vein are jewels have meaning i.e amethyst for peace, love and protection. As a child, we used to fire the heads of daisies at our classmates. Mother Nature would not have been happy. K xx
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
-
Thanks for the nice review and rating, Kay. I guess we put meanings to everything. No she wouldn't be happy about mistreating her flowers like that.
Joan
Comment from Janet Foor
Budding Feelings is an excellent atom poem. I enjoyed learning what the various flowers mean. Great choice of a daisy for your artwork. Daisies do make us happy.
Nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
Budding Feelings is an excellent atom poem. I enjoyed learning what the various flowers mean. Great choice of a daisy for your artwork. Daisies do make us happy.
Nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
-
Hi Janet,
Thanks for the nice review and generous rating. Glad you like the poem and the artwork.
Joan
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
These are fun verses encouraging precise word selection in this succinct format. Your visual is a delight and your floral words bloom:) into deeper resonance with their individual significance. Well done, Joan, and thank you for sharing your excellent post! Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
These are fun verses encouraging precise word selection in this succinct format. Your visual is a delight and your floral words bloom:) into deeper resonance with their individual significance. Well done, Joan, and thank you for sharing your excellent post! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
-
Thanks for taking the time to read and review this poem. I appreciate both the comments and the rating. Glad you enjoyed it.
Joan
Comment from Terry wrote
This is a new style of poetry for me ... so simple and clean. I enjoyed reading it with the meter it offers. The final stanza left me a bit puzzzlied, but I will pursue the meaning, as suggested. Thanks for sharing this!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
This is a new style of poetry for me ... so simple and clean. I enjoyed reading it with the meter it offers. The final stanza left me a bit puzzzlied, but I will pursue the meaning, as suggested. Thanks for sharing this!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
-
Thanks, Terry.
Joan
Comment from Ulla
Well, now I have learned something. Now I know what different flowers means for my emotional life. Thank you so much for sharing this. It's a great entry for the club. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
Well, now I have learned something. Now I know what different flowers means for my emotional life. Thank you so much for sharing this. It's a great entry for the club. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
-
Thanks for your nice comments and generous rating, Ulla. I learned this while researching to write this.
Joan
Comment from mermaids
Love how you describe the meaning of these flowers. It is almost as if they are live characters. Excellent atom form that is light and takes the reader to another place.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
Love how you describe the meaning of these flowers. It is almost as if they are live characters. Excellent atom form that is light and takes the reader to another place.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
-
Thanks for your continued support, Elaine. Glad you liked it.
Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed reading about the different meanings of the flowers. This entry is written in a fun way so it's fun and easy to read.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed reading about the different meanings of the flowers. This entry is written in a fun way so it's fun and easy to read.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
-
Thanks for the review, Barbara. I am glad you found it fun to read.
Joan
Comment from Shanbreen
I like the explanations of what each flower symbolizes. When I have to take flowers to someone, I am at complete loss at which flower is right for the occasion. Mostly, I mix them all up.=)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
I like the explanations of what each flower symbolizes. When I have to take flowers to someone, I am at complete loss at which flower is right for the occasion. Mostly, I mix them all up.=)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
-
Hi Shanbreen,
Thanks for the review. Maybe a bouquet of them all can show your range of emotions for the recipient of the flowers.
Joan