Samson and Taylor Get Hitched
how Travis Kelcey got AIDS3 total reviews
Comment from Rene Tyo
Funny a hell is what this is. Love the references to the lyrics. The word count inflation is a hoot. Overall, I really enjoyed this. I'm not sure if it's the happy ending or feel good story many will expect to read, but I enjoyed this.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Funny a hell is what this is. Love the references to the lyrics. The word count inflation is a hoot. Overall, I really enjoyed this. I'm not sure if it's the happy ending or feel good story many will expect to read, but I enjoyed this.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much Rene and glad you enjoyed! 🦍
Comment from Mufasa
Four stars simply because I was able to pick up on metaphors and implications - and due to the fact that this is the weirdest shit I've read here, so far.
Cheers-
M
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Four stars simply because I was able to pick up on metaphors and implications - and due to the fact that this is the weirdest shit I've read here, so far.
Cheers-
M
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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I'll take both of those as compliments, and there's plenty more where that came from, though usually more subtle and less graphic.
Just FYI, you left three stars instead of four. Anything less than four should include suggestions for improvement. I'd be glad to hear feedback on anything that you think can be improved. Thanks!
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My apologies. That was a mistake on my part. I don't normally leave three stars on anyone's work. If I feel it needs work - I leave it alone. I've had numerous negative responses upon pointing out obvious mistakes, or lines that simply didn't make sense.
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Thank you for updating it! Yeah I feel the same way. Except, if I'm reviewing while drinking (dangerous).
Comment from lancellot
Well, that was quite a build up, and then... nothing. Not sure if this is a joke or the author forgot to actually post anything. But, there really isn't anything here to give a review and score of, unless the entire post is the picture and brief comment.
If this is an accident. Please, let me know when it is fixed and I will gladly re-review it.
Update.
Now the link works.
Well, it's different. It is meant to be humor, but it is still prose, so you should edit out the errors. But, if this isn't meant to be serious, why bother.
"Don't worry about it wifey," Samson winked.
-"Don't worry about it wifey." Samson winked.
"Your way to big for me. You're d*ck isn't
- "You're way too big for me. Your d*ck isn't
But you do have to choose between me and baseball.
-huh?
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Well, that was quite a build up, and then... nothing. Not sure if this is a joke or the author forgot to actually post anything. But, there really isn't anything here to give a review and score of, unless the entire post is the picture and brief comment.
If this is an accident. Please, let me know when it is fixed and I will gladly re-review it.
Update.
Now the link works.
Well, it's different. It is meant to be humor, but it is still prose, so you should edit out the errors. But, if this isn't meant to be serious, why bother.
"Don't worry about it wifey," Samson winked.
-"Don't worry about it wifey." Samson winked.
"Your way to big for me. You're d*ck isn't
- "You're way too big for me. Your d*ck isn't
But you do have to choose between me and baseball.
-huh?
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Click on the red "proceed" text. I promise there's a 1000-word story there that will wake you up.
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Yeah, I thought that was meant to be a link, but you cannot click it. I would advise just posting the story. You have the warnings and wall. Most will stop at the wall anyway.
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OK thanks for the advice; I've changed it. Check back now.
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Thanks for updating. I had reasons for those things but I have changed some of them based on your comments, especially where it wasn't obvious. The your/you're stuff is just making fun of the lack of precision of Taylor's lyrics. That might not be as evident to the casual reader.
