Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Baby named MAC"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What an intense and layered story! . The tension between Aliss and Mark and the actions of the nanny really kept me engaged in the story. Great job capturing the drama in this story!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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What an intense and layered story! . The tension between Aliss and Mark and the actions of the nanny really kept me engaged in the story. Great job capturing the drama in this story!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Wow thank you so much!
Comment from patcelaw
Extremely well written story and I enjoyed very much listening to it. You're certain the structure of your paragraphing and your overall presentation is very good. Patricia.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Extremely well written story and I enjoyed very much listening to it. You're certain the structure of your paragraphing and your overall presentation is very good. Patricia.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Pat there are more coming. thank you for your continued support