Happiness? What's That?
simple words about happiness3 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
This is such a profound little poem. It really is. I love that it rhymes, and has a kind of meter -- two "feet" per line. I understand that my mom is only happy when OTHER people envy her, or admire her. Without external validation, she gets annoyed and irritable, which is so strange, because she's always saying, "No one can make you unhappy except yourself," whenever she does something cruel to someone. :(
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This is such a profound little poem. It really is. I love that it rhymes, and has a kind of meter -- two "feet" per line. I understand that my mom is only happy when OTHER people envy her, or admire her. Without external validation, she gets annoyed and irritable, which is so strange, because she's always saying, "No one can make you unhappy except yourself," whenever she does something cruel to someone. :(
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Happy Poems writing prompt. Some wise words in this poem. Happiness lives inside. Find it and hold on to it. Good luck in the contest.
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An excellent entry for the Happy Poems writing prompt. Some wise words in this poem. Happiness lives inside. Find it and hold on to it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
Comment from SimianSavant
Your text is superb. It's a very strong contender in the contest. Good font and color choices too. Yellow is commonly associated with cheerfulness but in large quantities causes anxiety, which goes well with your point.
Visually you could make this way more competitive by removing all that ugly white background. I typically use the website remove.bg and it's very easy. It works perfectly for about 97% of the images I use and it should work quite well on your particular images.
Good luck and thanks for a great read;
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Your text is superb. It's a very strong contender in the contest. Good font and color choices too. Yellow is commonly associated with cheerfulness but in large quantities causes anxiety, which goes well with your point.
Visually you could make this way more competitive by removing all that ugly white background. I typically use the website remove.bg and it's very easy. It works perfectly for about 97% of the images I use and it should work quite well on your particular images.
Good luck and thanks for a great read;
🦍
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024