2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "~ * ~ Blue Moon ~ * ~"*
8 total reviews
Comment from RJ Heritage
It is a sad, but hopeful poem tgat brings me ti thoughts of one dealing with cancer. This can be a very difficult period of time in a person's. Have seen my share of reality that such a a thing brings. I have also witnessed the hope and joy of seeing it defeated.
Great way of expressing about this topic.
RzJ
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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It is a sad, but hopeful poem tgat brings me ti thoughts of one dealing with cancer. This can be a very difficult period of time in a person's. Have seen my share of reality that such a a thing brings. I have also witnessed the hope and joy of seeing it defeated.
Great way of expressing about this topic.
RzJ
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from barbara.wilkey
AMEN!!!!! I am guessing cancer treatment and yes, watching a full moon does help. I know from experience. Thank you for sharing this emotional poem and presentation with us.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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AMEN!!!!! I am guessing cancer treatment and yes, watching a full moon does help. I know from experience. Thank you for sharing this emotional poem and presentation with us.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Beautifully written and presented as always.
A delicate subject is portrayed with elegance and dignity.
The imagery in both word and pictures complement each other perfectly.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Beautifully written and presented as always.
A delicate subject is portrayed with elegance and dignity.
The imagery in both word and pictures complement each other perfectly.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Shirley. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, Blue Moon, has the proper formatting and speaks to some suppressive happening, perhaps, which has either occurred or been alluded to here.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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This tanka, Blue Moon, has the proper formatting and speaks to some suppressive happening, perhaps, which has either occurred or been alluded to here.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
cool... i like the "locks of hair falling over a creek of hope" imagery
a great tanka with deep emotion and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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cool... i like the "locks of hair falling over a creek of hope" imagery
a great tanka with deep emotion and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Neonewman
This is another beautifully crafted piece, Gypsy. It's captivating from top to bottom. I love moonlit surf. They're relaxing. Thank you for sharing your artistry, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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This is another beautifully crafted piece, Gypsy. It's captivating from top to bottom. I love moonlit surf. They're relaxing. Thank you for sharing your artistry, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
I wonder why the locks of hair are falling - did she go in? cut her hair?
I liked the lovely illustration and the "waves of pain" because often pain comes in waves. I liked the "creek of hope" best because even with an ocean of problems, just small creek of hope will help us.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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I wonder why the locks of hair are falling - did she go in? cut her hair?
I liked the lovely illustration and the "waves of pain" because often pain comes in waves. I liked the "creek of hope" best because even with an ocean of problems, just small creek of hope will help us.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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She has cancer, I guess it's too obscure 😔 if you don't get nobody can. I'll see what I can do.
Thank you very much, big sister.
❤️ 👐 🤗
Marival 😊
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Ah. When I lost my hair due to chemo, it was more like it just fell off like a tree losing its leaves. I guess I think of "lock" as a snip of hair that people kept as souvenir.
I thought you were referring to maybe the lock that a ship goes through at first...with all the water imagery.
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I like you edit!
I wonder if this would make it clearer:
"as her hair falls out
into a stream of hope"
Anyway, I visualized the falling hair becoming a stream and because the chemo is working there is hope.
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We just had an earthquake 😳 5.6
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Oh no! Did anything fall?
Atticus is asleep now, isn't he?
Hope you all are safe!
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I was in bed. It felt like waves but we are all okay
Thank you, sis
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I'm glad! Hope you all can have a good night's sleep. 💖💞🙏🙏
Comment from royowen
What an excellent play on words that tends to bend the emotions to explore the mysterious and abstractions that fill the imagination of the reader, well done Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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What an excellent play on words that tends to bend the emotions to explore the mysterious and abstractions that fill the imagination of the reader, well done Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy 😊
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Most welcome