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Birthday Trip

A limerick based on the prompt Karen's Birthday.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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I thank you for the effort on my behalf you don't even know me. That was a lovely thing to do. My barfing days are behind me. I never really drank much. I'll be 69 on Monday my sisters are taking me out for sushi. Yep! I am a real wild child! :-)

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you for your thank you. Happy Birthday!! I hope you have many more to celebrate.
Comment from jim vecchio
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A good entry for the contest. You deserve to win just for rhyming Galveston and unison. But you forgot the last two lines:
They got sick after eating venison
While they were each reding Tennyson.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
    Thank you for your review and feedback.
reply by jim vecchio on 06-Aug-2024
    Sorry this das was very trying and I had to rush.
Comment from patcelaw
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It sounds as though they Just a little too much, I enjoyed your small pool. It flows very well and read aloud. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and also wish you a very, very good week. Patricia.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
    Thank you for your review and feedback.