Loneliness
It’s okay to be alone2 total reviews
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your piece beautifully explores the journey from feeling overwhelmed by loneliness to finding peace in it. The personification of loneliness as a gentle voice inviting you to sit and relax adds a tender touch. The way you move from fear to a calming acceptance, discovering that loneliness is part of you, is deeply moving. The imagery of having a cup of coffee or tea and appreciating the simple beauty around you highlights a profound moment of self-discovery and peace. Overall, your writing captures the complex and comforting realization that loneliness can be a companion rather than just an adversary.
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Your piece beautifully explores the journey from feeling overwhelmed by loneliness to finding peace in it. The personification of loneliness as a gentle voice inviting you to sit and relax adds a tender touch. The way you move from fear to a calming acceptance, discovering that loneliness is part of you, is deeply moving. The imagery of having a cup of coffee or tea and appreciating the simple beauty around you highlights a profound moment of self-discovery and peace. Overall, your writing captures the complex and comforting realization that loneliness can be a companion rather than just an adversary.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
Comment from Christina Kinney
Beautifully written and captures the essence of togetherness in feeling alone
5/5 for all aspects
Massive well done to the author of the work and all the best luck moving forward
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Beautifully written and captures the essence of togetherness in feeling alone
5/5 for all aspects
Massive well done to the author of the work and all the best luck moving forward
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
