Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so moving. You capture the sense of longing so well. The way you describe the sea of memories and the echoes of happiness really touched me. It's beautifully heartfelt. Keep sharing your wonderful work!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
Thank you so much for the encouraging review.
Comment from
Bill Schott
The free verse, Please Rescue Me, establishes the loneliness and also builds a plea to convince the person who has left to reconsider this separation. Well stated and nicely spaced.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
Thanks for the read and review.