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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your writing carries an incredible emotional depth and raw honesty that really touched me. The way you share the frustration of witnessing a world in distress while feeling helpless to change it is so moving. Thank you for pouring your heart into this poem. It powerful and thought provoking.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Your writing carries an incredible emotional depth and raw honesty that really touched me. The way you share the frustration of witnessing a world in distress while feeling helpless to change it is so moving. Thank you for pouring your heart into this poem. It powerful and thought provoking.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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thank you also...ill keep trying.
Comment from jim vecchio
I'm glad you put these thoughts into words. I sometimes face terrible challenges, as th4 other day when I fell in the shower and had to figure out how to get up and back to my wheelchair. I am thankful it happened, though, because I did not give up till I got up. One small typo: second paragraph: "their" should be "there".
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I'm glad you put these thoughts into words. I sometimes face terrible challenges, as th4 other day when I fell in the shower and had to figure out how to get up and back to my wheelchair. I am thankful it happened, though, because I did not give up till I got up. One small typo: second paragraph: "their" should be "there".
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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thank you. we must stay the course.
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So true.
