2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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7 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Being a widow can be very lonely. Even the crickets know it. Thank you for sharing this emotional poem with us. I could feel the loneliness. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Being a widow can be very lonely. Even the crickets know it. Thank you for sharing this emotional poem with us. I could feel the loneliness. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Yet again, you create a stunning presentation, this time in these charcoal colours reflecting the solitude and the silence of your mesmerising verse. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Yet again, you create a stunning presentation, this time in these charcoal colours reflecting the solitude and the silence of your mesmerising verse. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
i agree with this... a great poem with nice bittersweet imagery of walking alone once again...
cool top pic... love how the path kind of begins at the words...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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i agree with this... a great poem with nice bittersweet imagery of walking alone once again...
cool top pic... love how the path kind of begins at the words...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much , Shelley.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from lyenochka
That's so sad that even the moon and the crickets are gone. The sadness makes the silence even more oppressive. There is no light from the moon and no song from the crickets.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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That's so sad that even the moon and the crickets are gone. The sadness makes the silence even more oppressive. There is no light from the moon and no song from the crickets.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
❤️ 😊 love
Marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very well written 15 or less words poem, in your very strong format of Haiku. The absence of both celestial and animal nature, amplifes the fact that she is lonesome and alone. The black and white misty motif plays along well in theme.
Good one for the cotest
RJ
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Very well written 15 or less words poem, in your very strong format of Haiku. The absence of both celestial and animal nature, amplifes the fact that she is lonesome and alone. The black and white misty motif plays along well in theme.
Good one for the cotest
RJ
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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No contest. Thank you very much, RJ.
Gypsy hugs 😊
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You're welcome
Comment from RodG
Your short poem truly captures the MOOD of this scene where a lonesome widow walks alone on a very silent, moonless night. Your use of soft W and S sounds achieves this effect. Rod
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Your short poem truly captures the MOOD of this scene where a lonesome widow walks alone on a very silent, moonless night. Your use of soft W and S sounds achieves this effect. Rod
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Rod
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Neonewman
Damn! I wish I had a six to give this powerful piece, Gypsy. Everything about this riveting. Thank you for sharing your talent young lady.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Damn! I wish I had a six to give this powerful piece, Gypsy. Everything about this riveting. Thank you for sharing your talent young lady.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve. I appreciate the kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
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My pleasure, Gypsy.