So Far Away
Sad Etheree7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This sad etheree, So Far Away, has the proper formatting and brings the powerful pictures to mind of family and home in the most pleasant and sometimes heartrending sense of separation.
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This sad etheree, So Far Away, has the proper formatting and brings the powerful pictures to mind of family and home in the most pleasant and sometimes heartrending sense of separation.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
Comment from zanya
This Etheree evokes a sense of homesickness and how it can feel even after a number of years referring to specific aspects of home that are especially missed, 'where the kangaroos roam.'
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This Etheree evokes a sense of homesickness and how it can feel even after a number of years referring to specific aspects of home that are especially missed, 'where the kangaroos roam.'
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
Comment from LJbutterfly
Sadness based on homesickness is expressed in every line. Living in another country with another culture and ways of doing things, requires courage and stamina. Remembering the beauty of your previous home can be understandably sad. Best wishes in the contest.
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Sadness based on homesickness is expressed in every line. Living in another country with another culture and ways of doing things, requires courage and stamina. Remembering the beauty of your previous home can be understandably sad. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
Comment from Gunner Lil
Very nice picture used for this poem;
It is an easy read which has much emotion.
This writing also has a very good pace and flow.
Thank you for sharing and good luck!
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Very nice picture used for this poem;
It is an easy read which has much emotion.
This writing also has a very good pace and flow.
Thank you for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
Comment from DJ Allen
Although sad, it was also wishful for a different time, memories of yesteryear and childhood, all rolled into the thought of being oh so far from home! Well done!
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Although sad, it was also wishful for a different time, memories of yesteryear and childhood, all rolled into the thought of being oh so far from home! Well done!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
Hi, I like how you created your poem words into a shape like a tree, and it matches with your expression of a Christmas Tree story. Your title is catchy to tied in all your expressive description of your poem. A great move from your end, and congrats to overall of your writing an excellent 5 star, and wishing you the best. Oh, I do not have a 6 star option.
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Hi, I like how you created your poem words into a shape like a tree, and it matches with your expression of a Christmas Tree story. Your title is catchy to tied in all your expressive description of your poem. A great move from your end, and congrats to overall of your writing an excellent 5 star, and wishing you the best. Oh, I do not have a 6 star option.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
Comment from bonespur
It's really hard when you're separated from the ones you love. You feel alone and desolate like you're the only one on your team. It's really sad. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
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It's really hard when you're separated from the ones you love. You feel alone and desolate like you're the only one on your team. It's really sad. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
