2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Rays of Sun"*
10 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
The transition from those glorious sunlit, golden fields to the happy and inspired faces of the children is skilfully achieved to create an impact of God-given beauty. Thank you for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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The transition from those glorious sunlit, golden fields to the happy and inspired faces of the children is skilfully achieved to create an impact of God-given beauty. Thank you for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Children are so innocent, and God shines through them all the time. Thank you for sharing this beautiful reminder with us and the beautiful presentation. I enjoyed it all.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Children are so innocent, and God shines through them all the time. Thank you for sharing this beautiful reminder with us and the beautiful presentation. I enjoyed it all.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
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Comment from shelley kaye
aw this was a very cool, uplifting and hopeful tanka
nice imagery with the face of god in a child's eyes as they play
and i like the rays of sun over golden fields - reminds me of sting's fields of gold song...
great tanka - thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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aw this was a very cool, uplifting and hopeful tanka
nice imagery with the face of god in a child's eyes as they play
and i like the rays of sun over golden fields - reminds me of sting's fields of gold song...
great tanka - thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Fields of gold is one of my favorit songs.
Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Neonewman
This is a captivating piece you have offered, Gypsy. I love the artwork; it is beautiful. No doubt, the face of god can be seen in children. They are one of his many gifts to us.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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This is a captivating piece you have offered, Gypsy. I love the artwork; it is beautiful. No doubt, the face of god can be seen in children. They are one of his many gifts to us.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve.
Gypsy hugs
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My pleasure, Gypsy, on both readings.
Comment from tfawcus
I like it. Children have a much purer vision of the face of God than we seem to have as grown-ups. Your tanka shows it well, both in the construction of the poem and your choice of presentation.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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I like it. Children have a much purer vision of the face of God than we seem to have as grown-ups. Your tanka shows it well, both in the construction of the poem and your choice of presentation.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Tony. I appreciate your kind review.
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
Yes. It looks like the face of God in the sky. I could almost see a face. But it doesn't matter. God is everywhere. I like this happy poem from you.
Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Yes. It looks like the face of God in the sky. I could almost see a face. But it doesn't matter. God is everywhere. I like this happy poem from you.
Well done.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Lisa
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Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautifully written and presented writing. I believe that the innocence of children give them a better view of who God is. I once asked a kid who he thought God was. He quickly replied that he did not know, but that he can tell when God speaks to him. Such is the uncomplicated vision of childhood.
RJ
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Beautifully written and presented writing. I believe that the innocence of children give them a better view of who God is. I once asked a kid who he thought God was. He quickly replied that he did not know, but that he can tell when God speaks to him. Such is the uncomplicated vision of childhood.
RJ
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Yes, children are naturally wise until life change them.
Thank you very much, RJ.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a beautiful poem, Gypsy. I love that you use the fun of children to reflect the amazing grace of God. He has always been a grandfatherly figure to me. I can see him just enjoying the smiles an laughter of his children, All of them. Your poem made me smile. Gretchen
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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This was a beautiful poem, Gypsy. I love that you use the fun of children to reflect the amazing grace of God. He has always been a grandfatherly figure to me. I can see him just enjoying the smiles an laughter of his children, All of them. Your poem made me smile. Gretchen
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. Children are wiser than adults until life change them.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely tanka Gypsy and a gorgeous presentation with the two beautiful pictures. I loved the cheerful tone of thisw one with the children playing out in the sunshine. Very nicve,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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This is a lovely tanka Gypsy and a gorgeous presentation with the two beautiful pictures. I loved the cheerful tone of thisw one with the children playing out in the sunshine. Very nicve,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Pearl. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I love the laughter of little ones because it's so pure! And in their innocence and their freshness from the Hands of the Lord, we can see more of God's loving presence!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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I love the laughter of little ones because it's so pure! And in their innocence and their freshness from the Hands of the Lord, we can see more of God's loving presence!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Yes, big sister, you are right. I am happy you like it.
love,
marival