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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well this is charming and an excellent entry under the heading of romance. I like the way you've included dialogue throughout, together with your monorhyme. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
Well this is charming and an excellent entry under the heading of romance. I like the way you've included dialogue throughout, together with your monorhyme. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Debbie.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Nicely written.
Has a childlike innocence which appears to define the unique
connection which romance imbues.
Presented with an engaging image.
Complies with the contest requirements.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
Nicely written.
Has a childlike innocence which appears to define the unique
connection which romance imbues.
Presented with an engaging image.
Complies with the contest requirements.
Good luck.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Many thanks, Shirley.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This poem captures a playful and lighthearted tone with its direct approach. The initial lines express admiration and a desire for a kiss in a straightforward manner. The final line, "Wow! Yeah! That was bliss!" adds a sense of immediate gratification and joy.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
This poem captures a playful and lighthearted tone with its direct approach. The initial lines express admiration and a desire for a kiss in a straightforward manner. The final line, "Wow! Yeah! That was bliss!" adds a sense of immediate gratification and joy.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Patty. xxx.
Comment from jessizero
This was a sweet poem for the "5-7-5 romance" writing prompt. You got the syllable count right, too. The picture added to it in a good way. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
This was a sweet poem for the "5-7-5 romance" writing prompt. You got the syllable count right, too. The picture added to it in a good way. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Many thanks.