2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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8 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
I just loved this haiku, Marival. It just says it all. The illustration goes so very well with this. Thanks also for the extensive notes, which explains it all. Un abrazo y besitos, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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I just loved this haiku, Marival. It just says it all. The illustration goes so very well with this. Thanks also for the extensive notes, which explains it all. Un abrazo y besitos, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Ulla.
Besitos y abrazos
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
cool pic and imagery of holding the moon in one's hands
and interesting and thought-provoking satori...
love the second pic walking towards the sea, too
cool colours and presentations
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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cool pic and imagery of holding the moon in one's hands
and interesting and thought-provoking satori...
love the second pic walking towards the sea, too
cool colours and presentations
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Hmm, with that haphazard holding of the moon, I guess the tide levels have changed and the seas have been set on a wild cycle with the moon's tug altered. Fun poem and pictures!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Hmm, with that haphazard holding of the moon, I guess the tide levels have changed and the seas have been set on a wild cycle with the moon's tug altered. Fun poem and pictures!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
love,
marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
Well it certainly seems that she came about this action very quickly, without counting the cost. I am not certain which image was meant to come first, but the lower one makes me think that her first action of haphazardly holding the full moon, resulted in her stepping into or approaching turbulent water. To me, this gives a warning to the way we choose to live.
RJ
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Well it certainly seems that she came about this action very quickly, without counting the cost. I am not certain which image was meant to come first, but the lower one makes me think that her first action of haphazardly holding the full moon, resulted in her stepping into or approaching turbulent water. To me, this gives a warning to the way we choose to live.
RJ
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from juliaSjames
I love the recklessness of youth epitomized in this entertaining ekphrastic write. Thanks for the information about contemporary haiku. I confess to being a bit stick in the mud when it comes to my own haiku. But that doesn't stop me enjoying all the ways the form comes to life in your skilled hands.
Thanks for sharing, inspiring and teaching!
Blessings, Cheryl
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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I love the recklessness of youth epitomized in this entertaining ekphrastic write. Thanks for the information about contemporary haiku. I confess to being a bit stick in the mud when it comes to my own haiku. But that doesn't stop me enjoying all the ways the form comes to life in your skilled hands.
Thanks for sharing, inspiring and teaching!
Blessings, Cheryl
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Cheryl. You are welcome (*=*) I love teaching and sharing what I know.
Gypsy hugs
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Comment from Neonewman
I love the artwork as you give life to it with your astonishing poetry. I enjoy reading your work and look forward to the next review.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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I love the artwork as you give life to it with your astonishing poetry. I enjoy reading your work and look forward to the next review.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve.
Gypsy hugs
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My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This poem beautifully captures the image of an impetuous maiden holding the moon, symbolizing both beauty and recklessness. The use of "haphazardly" effectively conveys a sense of whimsical carelessness, a compelling and evocative piece that combines delicate imagery with a hint of chaos.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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This poem beautifully captures the image of an impetuous maiden holding the moon, symbolizing both beauty and recklessness. The use of "haphazardly" effectively conveys a sense of whimsical carelessness, a compelling and evocative piece that combines delicate imagery with a hint of chaos.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Patty.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem caused to think of Sami and her impetuous nature. LOL Thank you for sharing this and causing me to smile. I completely enjoyed the entire presentation.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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This poem caused to think of Sami and her impetuous nature. LOL Thank you for sharing this and causing me to smile. I completely enjoyed the entire presentation.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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LoL yes, I can see why this poem would remind you of Sami. She is a very independent and spirited young lady.
Thank you very much, Barbara.
Gypsy hugs