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Prelude

A night of love begins

5 total reviews 
Comment from F. William Lester
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The artwork you chose, and your poem together paint a very steamy liaison. My aging ticker is working overtime. :) Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest. Stay well.f

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
    Many thanks.
reply by F. William Lester on 20-Jul-2024
    You're very welcome.
Comment from Catherine Deslippe
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Beautifully written. A love poem or words whispered, usually hard to combine two. You did it perfectly. Thank you,I really enjoyed reading it and the art work fits it perfectly.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
    Lovely review, Catherine. Many thanks.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Prelude, has the proper formatting and says all that needs to be said, although, if she was waiting in the sack for me, I would just assume she needed me -- NOW!!

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
    Cheers, Bill. Your approach sounds like a recipe for premature emasculation.
Comment from jessizero
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I think this was a great entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. I enjoyed your rhymes, and you got the syllable count right. I don't think you really needed the disclaimer, but I know it's better to err on the side of caution. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Many thanks.
Comment from papa55mike
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Those are the words every spouse longs to hear from a loving wife. I don't see the warning. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    So kind, Mike. Thank you.