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Excessive heat can be deadly.

6 total reviews 
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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My sister Tammy bought these individual fans. They look like a fat hairband. They start at $12 all the way up. I think she paid about $20.00 for ours. You charge them up and they last 10 hours or so. I wore one while we were in the storage units and I did just fine while they were sweating bullets. Your great writing tells me you could use one. Try using a liter bottle to auto water your plants. Karen

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for the thoughtful comments and review! That fan sounds great!
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 30-Jul-2024
    U R Welcome Karen
Comment from lyenochka
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Congratulations on your fiftieth post!
I like how you start with the "scorching" heat that takes away the life from the land and leaves it "barren". Your second line should have four syllables.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
    Good catch on the syllables!! I fixed it. Thanks for the nice review!
Comment from karenina
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Congratulations on Milestone post #50! That came fast, didn't it? I'm so sorry you have no A/C in your home. It's been 90-95 here for a week and I'm quite sure I would have expired without A/C! Excellent Cinquain. Perfect count. TIMELY topic!

Karenina

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
    Thanks again for the kind words Karen!
    We are starting to cool down a bit finally!
reply by karenina on 16-Jul-2024
    Thank goodness! It's 94 here!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Cinquain Poetry contest. Congratulations on your milestone post of 50! Nice job. Your poem is perfect for today's weather. The image you added looks like a close-up of my facial pores! Stay cool and hydrate!

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
    Thanks for all your kind words and review! I appreciate you!
Comment from June Sargent
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So sad but true. The heat wave has been devastating for both flora and fauna. Let's hope we all get some relief soon! Your words and picture captured the intensity.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
    Thank you for the nice review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Firstly congratulations on your 50th milestone post. Extreme heat can be destructive and the earth needs moisture to allow plants and flowers to grow, a poignant write Jodi, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
    Thank you Dolly! I appreciate your review and comments!