Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I understand we must all die at our appointed time. God is there to help us through it. I couldn't find any way to improve this poem.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024

Thanks Barbara and enjoy this beautiful morning.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Lindsey Russell

Excellent

This is eye opening. Especially the note at the end. Here: Takr a Single Breath" Did you mean Take? Thank you for sharing and happy writing!!!!

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024

Thanks Lindsey and I corrected the grammar issue.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought your poem really did a wonderful job of looking at life's journey and the fact that we all are going to die. Well done on capturing such profound and deep thoughts with such grace.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024

Thanks Micheal and stay tuned for "Ring of Skulls!'
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