The Poets Menagerie
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Culmination "A collection of poems
6 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well this is very dramatic, Lea! I think you might be referring to the publication of your long-awaited book. And I'm going out on a limb here but the "grey eons" could refer to your lifetime's work coming into fruition. If so, congratulations! If not, congratulations anyway:)) Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Well this is very dramatic, Lea! I think you might be referring to the publication of your long-awaited book. And I'm going out on a limb here but the "grey eons" could refer to your lifetime's work coming into fruition. If so, congratulations! If not, congratulations anyway:)) Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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As always your insight is right on the money yes this refers to my book in the culmination of the first one. Glad to see you here and offering your words of wisdom and your support thank you again for your fine rating have a great night!
Comment from Teri7
Lea, This is a very well written Cinquain poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Lea, This is a very well written Cinquain poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you Teri! I appreciate you stopping in for a reading offering your kind comments for your time and for your great rating I thank you for that as well and hope you're having a great night!
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You are so welcome! I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I read this contest entry earlier and wrote a review, but for some reason I got the death star of continued roaming and the review never saved. I got off the site and did other things and came back. I enjoyed your entry and want to wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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I read this contest entry earlier and wrote a review, but for some reason I got the death star of continued roaming and the review never saved. I got off the site and did other things and came back. I enjoyed your entry and want to wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you Barbara I'm glad you enjoyed this always happy to see you. Thank you your pain is a great value to me thanks for stopping in I hope you have an amazing night!
Comment from BethShelby
Interesting photo abnormally that looks like some unusual taking place.
I assume your poem refers to the end of time and the quickening mentioned in the Bible when the dead are resurrected.
Shamily is girls name that means beautiful angel.
At the end of time those resurrected will be given immortality and will live forever through countless eons. Your poetry is like a riddle.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Interesting photo abnormally that looks like some unusual taking place.
I assume your poem refers to the end of time and the quickening mentioned in the Bible when the dead are resurrected.
Shamily is girls name that means beautiful angel.
At the end of time those resurrected will be given immortality and will live forever through countless eons. Your poetry is like a riddle.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Hi Beth how are you nice to see you here I'm glad that you like my poem I am always interested in your insights they're usually different from everyone else's so thank you. This poem is about an accumulation of efforts that finally came together in one big burst the gray eons of time talk about how long it took to get there. I will soon make an announcement of the body of work I'm very pleased with and you have been a part of that so thank you again I hope you have the best night!
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
Your photo helps a lot with your Cinquain poetry. I read it three times, and trying to digest it to get the point across. So when I analyzed each word, and looked into the picture, it's sort made sense! Wish you win!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Your photo helps a lot with your Cinquain poetry. I read it three times, and trying to digest it to get the point across. So when I analyzed each word, and looked into the picture, it's sort made sense! Wish you win!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for coming in and reading and spending some time offering your fine comments thank you so much also for your great writing I hope you have an awesome night!
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Lea. I hope you are well
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Well, we don't know what the burst is, do we? I'm assuming at the end that it's the burst quickening. Am I right?
Or, is it The realization of gray eons ? Or the eons themselves?
I still think it's the burst, right or wrong. Because besides realization, it was the only subject in the poem
I liked reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Hi, Lea. I hope you are well
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Well, we don't know what the burst is, do we? I'm assuming at the end that it's the burst quickening. Am I right?
Or, is it The realization of gray eons ? Or the eons themselves?
I still think it's the burst, right or wrong. Because besides realization, it was the only subject in the poem
I liked reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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The first is like a culmination of a whole bunch of things coming together at once about to let loose good or bad and then the eons refers to the amount of time it got to that place I'm glad you like my poem thank you so much for stopping in for a read I appreciate any and all comments and yours are especially insightful I hope you have a great night!