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On the Water

It's a whole different world on the water

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Comment from Pamusart
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Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

That's a great image. You have posted here. Looking very peaceful and like you'd want to get in the kayak. Not I can't swim so the idea of a kayak is scary to me.

I thought it was clever how you use the blues in the water to mean blues like you're depressed

It must be nice to hear the quiet in nature, but also to hear the noise. Noises of birds, bumblebees, and noises of squirrels. Have you ever heard a squirrel yell at another squirrel? I have and It's very cute.

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
    Thank you so muCh!
Comment from Deborah Dybowski
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Sounds like a great experience kayaking. It's always great to feel that
calming affect the water can give. Sounds like you are a bit like me.
I very much enjoy the quiet and being in nature. A poem with a good
message, a way to take the blues away.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your kind words