Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Tempests,
This is such a beautiful poem full of passion and hope.

I like that her sweetness, made a bitter man able to love again.

It really is a very beautiful poem.

The photo nicely complements your words.
Best wishes to you,
Cindy

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024

Thank you for the lovely review.

Glad you enjoyed reading my wee poem.

I took some time to find that picture , I wanted it to express her sweetness.

PS: I love your avatar 🐾

Keep safe ! 🍀

Comment from Kelly Louisa Balliu

Excellent

This is lovely. It rhymes beautifully and the accompanying illustration speaks for itself. By summing this character's feelings up in only six lines, their depth of feeling couldn't be any clearer; in this case, the influence of love in turning one's life around. Enough said.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024

Yes, love can heal. Sadly there is not enough of it.

Thank you for the kind and insightful comments.

Glad you enjoyed the read! 🙂

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This six-line poem, Oneness with Her, has the proper formatting and finds that the woman has the "nesses" for everything desired in this relationship.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024

The most important
" ness" being her love/sweetness🙂.

Love heals hearts.

Thank you for reading and posting a review!