Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
This poem has a playful tone that I really enjoyed. The rhythmic flow and clever rhymes make it a delightful read. Your ability to blend humor with your storytelling is so well done. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
Thanks I am so glad you liked it.
Comment from
Earl Corp
Your poem read very much like a limerick. Your poem rhymed made sense and was hilarious. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
Thank you so much Earl for the great review and stars.