A dog named Max
He greets me at the door6 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a wonderfully written form for a child. Children need to learn about animals and how to treat them and how to enjoy them them and your poem would be very helpful in that endeavor. Patricia.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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This is a wonderfully written form for a child. Children need to learn about animals and how to treat them and how to enjoy them them and your poem would be very helpful in that endeavor. Patricia.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much Patricia 🙂
Comment from Earl Corp
Very nice job. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and seemed to hit your target audience. That very true that dogs will greet you every time like they've never seen you before. The dog in your picture looks like my mother-in-law's dog Leo.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Very nice job. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and seemed to hit your target audience. That very true that dogs will greet you every time like they've never seen you before. The dog in your picture looks like my mother-in-law's dog Leo.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from royowen
I think a dog is a wonderful gift and friend for any child, and your cute poem, is a great work that looks through the eyes of a child, it amazes me why kids aren't gifted one from parents, I had a wonderful relationship with a dog when I was a child, I'll always remember her, beautifully written Joanne, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I think a dog is a wonderful gift and friend for any child, and your cute poem, is a great work that looks through the eyes of a child, it amazes me why kids aren't gifted one from parents, I had a wonderful relationship with a dog when I was a child, I'll always remember her, beautifully written Joanne, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Than you so much Roy
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Welcome Joanne
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a nice poem for this contest! You beautifully capture the loving nature of Max. I love your descriptions. Including Max jumping, licking faces, and always being eager to greet you. Max comes across not just a pet but a cherished best friend who brings joy and laughter into your life. Well done! I think a child would love this! I did!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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What a nice poem for this contest! You beautifully capture the loving nature of Max. I love your descriptions. Including Max jumping, licking faces, and always being eager to greet you. Max comes across not just a pet but a cherished best friend who brings joy and laughter into your life. Well done! I think a child would love this! I did!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Joanne
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Yes, I agree that this poem would attract a child. Most children love dogs. There are some that are afraid, but those are a few.
Using a dog to get through to children is something pedophiles do also because it's so effective. You know they'll say they have a puppy in the car. They can't find their puppy. The next thing you know a little girl or boy has been kidnapped.
So, I think you have a good chance to get through to children and win this contest
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Hi, Joanne
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Yes, I agree that this poem would attract a child. Most children love dogs. There are some that are afraid, but those are a few.
Using a dog to get through to children is something pedophiles do also because it's so effective. You know they'll say they have a puppy in the car. They can't find their puppy. The next thing you know a little girl or boy has been kidnapped.
So, I think you have a good chance to get through to children and win this contest
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This will bring a smile to a child. There are some punctuation issues, but other than that, it is great. Good luck with it and thanks for sharing!!!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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This will bring a smile to a child. There are some punctuation issues, but other than that, it is great. Good luck with it and thanks for sharing!!!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much