Importance of Family
Family can be a source of strength for a lifetime.5 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
In order to Love thyself, you must first Love Heavenly.Father above , then you can Love your family and thyself.
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This was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis;
Thr Adjective and Objective Comtents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
'STILL PREACHING TO THE CHOIR HERE AT FANSTORY "
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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In order to Love thyself, you must first Love Heavenly.Father above , then you can Love your family and thyself.
...
This was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis;
Thr Adjective and Objective Comtents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
'STILL PREACHING TO THE CHOIR HERE AT FANSTORY "
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thanks for the read and the review. Keep preaching, well received here.
Comment from Trent Delaney
Nice poem and straight forward to the point with facts. Thank you so much for sharing this work. It was greatly appreciated and needs to be read by everyone nowadays.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Nice poem and straight forward to the point with facts. Thank you so much for sharing this work. It was greatly appreciated and needs to be read by everyone nowadays.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the read and the review.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Harry,
This prose/poem is so true. A close family is a strong asset in a strong self-concept and gives you a shelter in the storms of life. It is also great fun celebrating with them.
I was born and raised in the Northwest suburbs of Chicago. My brother owns two restaurants downtown near Soldier Field.
Congrats on being recognized writer and your 15th anniversary.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Hi Harry,
This prose/poem is so true. A close family is a strong asset in a strong self-concept and gives you a shelter in the storms of life. It is also great fun celebrating with them.
I was born and raised in the Northwest suburbs of Chicago. My brother owns two restaurants downtown near Soldier Field.
Congrats on being recognized writer and your 15th anniversary.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much for the read and review. And for the congrats. It was an unexpected honor. It is always a treat when families can get together at least in our case. We are lucky.
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Don't mention it. I agree.
Joan
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nicely written. Quite a good picture as well. I hope you do well here. Family can cure all ills. Moving near my sisters with all the work and problems involved has been well worth it. Good luck. Karen
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Nicely written. Quite a good picture as well. I hope you do well here. Family can cure all ills. Moving near my sisters with all the work and problems involved has been well worth it. Good luck. Karen
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thanks for the read and feedback. Glad you have been able to stay connected with family. I find it really helps one as we journey through life.
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You are so right. :-)
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Good writing. :-)
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.
I have almost no family bonds. My mother was very abusive. My father was distant didn't want children. Most of my siblings are very distant and they don't want to know if you're sick. They don't want to know if you're happy. As long as you stay out their way. I have two sisters and one brother that I'm close to. The other five I look on as acquaintances
However, I have discovered my new family, my husband's family and they are exactly everything you described in your poem. It's like getting a new life. The unconditional love is amazing
I'm glad that you have that fabric that you can count on to wrap yourself with comfort when you need it
This poem is segmented into six lines and fits the requirements of the contest. It is uplifting.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.
I have almost no family bonds. My mother was very abusive. My father was distant didn't want children. Most of my siblings are very distant and they don't want to know if you're sick. They don't want to know if you're happy. As long as you stay out their way. I have two sisters and one brother that I'm close to. The other five I look on as acquaintances
However, I have discovered my new family, my husband's family and they are exactly everything you described in your poem. It's like getting a new life. The unconditional love is amazing
I'm glad that you have that fabric that you can count on to wrap yourself with comfort when you need it
This poem is segmented into six lines and fits the requirements of the contest. It is uplifting.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your read and review. So please that you were able to connect with your husband's family. I find, in my case, having people to share joys and sorrows makes life a little easier.