Unfinished Brushstrokes
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Unfinished Brushstrokes - Chap 4"story of love, loss, new beginnings and secrets.
16 total reviews
Comment from Julie Helms
Looks good!
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Looks good!
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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HUrrah! I past the teacher's test with this one. Thank you as always!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Another chapter full of intrigue, action and much more.
A captivating beginning and end and a free flowing storyline.
A thoroughly enjoyable read.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Another chapter full of intrigue, action and much more.
A captivating beginning and end and a free flowing storyline.
A thoroughly enjoyable read.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Hi Shirley...Glad I am finally able to be back on FS and writing again. It was a horrible five days with out power or water. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
People are always looking for a bargain and shopping for the cheapest price, but as we all quickly learn, the least expensive isn't always the best way to go. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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People are always looking for a bargain and shopping for the cheapest price, but as we all quickly learn, the least expensive isn't always the best way to go. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Amen! Gotta shop around as they say. My eyes are blurring so I hope I can see all yur reviews and then that will be it for the night.....Suppose to be storms again shortly. Rivers out of the banks and flash flooding is coming. Oh fun!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Write me a birthday card please, please, please.
Get the flood started. You have added yet another layer of mystery, how do you do it? I marvel at your work. Karen
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Write me a birthday card please, please, please.
Get the flood started. You have added yet another layer of mystery, how do you do it? I marvel at your work. Karen
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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I see it says I've got till August so hurrah I'll get back to it when I get this done. Smiles, Carol
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okie dokie
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reserve a place
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is very well-written (although 2 paragraphs in the second portion are run together.) It was a good idea to run the two sections in the same entry. Now we know there really is something wrong with the man running the art gallery. We also know Jenna could be in a very dangerous position.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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This is very well-written (although 2 paragraphs in the second portion are run together.) It was a good idea to run the two sections in the same entry. Now we know there really is something wrong with the man running the art gallery. We also know Jenna could be in a very dangerous position.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Fixed and thank you for pointing it out.
The story is beginning to make it's twists and turns and I hope I keep you glued to the pages. I really appreciate your time and comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
It's getting better with each chapter. Now you have added more characters to the mix, which makes it all the more exciting. I will be with you all the way. This story shows great promise.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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It's getting better with each chapter. Now you have added more characters to the mix, which makes it all the more exciting. I will be with you all the way. This story shows great promise.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thanks for being so encouraging and for liking the story. I am using my laptop and its harder for me to type. Appreciate the thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Carol. I see a new element cropping up. There appears to be a theft ring, and it involves an old love of Eleanor's, a man who was a painter, himself. He has sent his nephew to help find his work as he's disabled.
We also see Jackson and
Audrey have problems over a painting that was damaged of Eleanor's and they are being blackmailed by a disreputable restorer.
Great job,
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Hi Carol. I see a new element cropping up. There appears to be a theft ring, and it involves an old love of Eleanor's, a man who was a painter, himself. He has sent his nephew to help find his work as he's disabled.
We also see Jackson and
Audrey have problems over a painting that was damaged of Eleanor's and they are being blackmailed by a disreputable restorer.
Great job,
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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And wait till you hit the next two chapters...one is being written. I don't think you know who Garth is but he's an FBI agent (a Texan cowboy) that many of my lady reader's asked for his return. It wasn't planned but what the reader wants, I try to give. Hope you enjoy it!
Smiles, Carol
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Understood!! Gotta love those Texans, lol.
Comment from Esther Brown
Oh boy I love these art thieves! Reminds me of a movie "How to steal a million". I tripped over the sentence: "What artist would risk their work to us?" Can it be worded slightly differently "risk displaying or entrust their work". Not quite sure how art galleries work. Esther
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Oh boy I love these art thieves! Reminds me of a movie "How to steal a million". I tripped over the sentence: "What artist would risk their work to us?" Can it be worded slightly differently "risk displaying or entrust their work". Not quite sure how art galleries work. Esther
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Fixed! I've been having all kinds of site troubles, losing what I type, reviews, spacing, anything you can imagine. About to pull my hair out.
Hope your trip was fantastic.
Smiles, Carol
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The trip was great except my sweet daisy dog got a sunburnt tongue. We had to camp for a bit until she recovered. Poor baby. 9 days on the Harley was too long and hot for a pup.
Comment from lyenochka
Well, things are getting rolling. I thought the gallery couple rather odd because they seem to be overreacting. But I guess more will be revealed when they meet up with Dylan. These days, they can take pictures of all the paintings and do comparisons. I hope that Eleanor and Charles have enough of a difference in style to distinguish their paintings!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Well, things are getting rolling. I thought the gallery couple rather odd because they seem to be overreacting. But I guess more will be revealed when they meet up with Dylan. These days, they can take pictures of all the paintings and do comparisons. I hope that Eleanor and Charles have enough of a difference in style to distinguish their paintings!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I think Dylan will difintely know the difference but will he get a chance to see her work? I don't know if he will or not. It's a small town just getting into the international art world. I think Audrey and Jackson are over their head.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
It's the characters and their persona I have difficulty following the roles of the multitude of mannish characters in your stories, you always have so many, although I do enjoy your stories, your plots are very complex, but simplistic in their goals, now their is another artist whose paintings have been tampered with, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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It's the characters and their persona I have difficulty following the roles of the multitude of mannish characters in your stories, you always have so many, although I do enjoy your stories, your plots are very complex, but simplistic in their goals, now their is another artist whose paintings have been tampered with, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Charles is Eleanor's brief love affair when they were young and the war was going on. Their paintings are similar because he taught her how to paint while he was healing at the makeshift hospital in France.
He loved her forever.
Thanks as always for the review and for the awesome stars.
Smiles, Carol
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Thank you for that Carol