The More Noise You Make...
lesson learned and forgotten2 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the First Memory writing prompt. Wow, a memory that far back is very impressive. It sounds like you have taken that lesson and changed it to work in your life today and its working out well for you! A squeaky wheel might work as a baby but as an adult it is just annoying. Thanks for sharing.
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An excellent entry for the First Memory writing prompt. Wow, a memory that far back is very impressive. It sounds like you have taken that lesson and changed it to work in your life today and its working out well for you! A squeaky wheel might work as a baby but as an adult it is just annoying. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
Comment from Dawn Munro
Awwww! Now we're talkin' -- sweet! But I do have one suggestion -- a typo?
"We had a new staff in the cafeteria." << I think you perhaps forgot to add the word "member"... "We had a new staff (member)..." The word "staff" implies plural, which makes the sentence incorrect without a singular noun.
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Awwww! Now we're talkin' -- sweet! But I do have one suggestion -- a typo?
"We had a new staff in the cafeteria." << I think you perhaps forgot to add the word "member"... "We had a new staff (member)..." The word "staff" implies plural, which makes the sentence incorrect without a singular noun.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024