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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Brilliance"
My thoughts boiled and churned.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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True wisdom is given to us from God. If He feels we need to know, He will let us know. I enjoyed reading this poem and couldn't find any way to improve it. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thanks Barbara for your review and added Wisdom.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from bonespur
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I enjoyed this reading. You're right about what's important is your morals and beliefs. Couple things to check is in the title you misspelled the and the part where you have and his love or his heavenly father I think should read for his heavenly father. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thanks s bonespit fpr your time and review.
    Doctor Ricky