2024 Gypsy's Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Short Black Dress".
17 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest. This is more like a Flash FIRE story. Very sensual and romantic. The picture you chose is perfect. Very good luck in the contest,
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest. This is more like a Flash FIRE story. Very sensual and romantic. The picture you chose is perfect. Very good luck in the contest,
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate it.
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
Okay, Miss Gypsy. Don't ever tell me you can't write prose. You have a chapter right there. This was one of thosethat made me remember when I first fell in love with my husband. We couldn't wait to be alone. This was excellent. Good luck in the contest. Gretchen
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Okay, Miss Gypsy. Don't ever tell me you can't write prose. You have a chapter right there. This was one of thosethat made me remember when I first fell in love with my husband. We couldn't wait to be alone. This was excellent. Good luck in the contest. Gretchen
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen.
Gypsy😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Yes, I could feel the excitement and the passion building in this entry. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Yes, I could feel the excitement and the passion building in this entry. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine story, Gypsy, I wish you could have included the continuation where he came in and asked if you had any of your homeade possum ssquares left!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Another fine story, Gypsy, I wish you could have included the continuation where he came in and asked if you had any of your homeade possum ssquares left!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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LoL.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, why do I have a feeling that No one got to see that short black dress by him - lol, but true. Your story has good imagery and sensory appeal. I could see it; and I could feel the moment. Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Hi Gypsy, why do I have a feeling that No one got to see that short black dress by him - lol, but true. Your story has good imagery and sensory appeal. I could see it; and I could feel the moment. Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
As always you've written a very good entry in this short prose contest Gypsy, you are very good at romantically inclined posts, and this was no exception my friend, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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As always you've written a very good entry in this short prose contest Gypsy, you are very good at romantically inclined posts, and this was no exception my friend, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Well done
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Racy stuff that! Great picture to match the story. I love these short little nuggets. They can be tougher than the long ones. Still moving and adjusting, but I am happy to be here. Out of sixes already. Sorry. I would have given you one. :-) Karen
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Racy stuff that! Great picture to match the story. I love these short little nuggets. They can be tougher than the long ones. Still moving and adjusting, but I am happy to be here. Out of sixes already. Sorry. I would have given you one. :-) Karen
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome. :-)
Comment from LJbutterfly
Beware of the woman in the short black dress. Even in a short story of only seventy five words, she can be dangerous. You created a delightful story with a sensuous ending. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Beware of the woman in the short black dress. Even in a short story of only seventy five words, she can be dangerous. You created a delightful story with a sensuous ending. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very well written Flash Fiction, that expresses the theme so well in such a short story. The woman is beautiful, and you met the criteria.
Good luck in the contest, this is a great entry.
RJ
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Very well written Flash Fiction, that expresses the theme so well in such a short story. The woman is beautiful, and you met the criteria.
Good luck in the contest, this is a great entry.
RJ
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Ooh, very sensual, skilfully building to the opening of the door, that tell-tale meeting of eyes and, then, just as we want to know more, the door is shut, leaving us outside! What a tease you are, Gypsy:)) Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Ooh, very sensual, skilfully building to the opening of the door, that tell-tale meeting of eyes and, then, just as we want to know more, the door is shut, leaving us outside! What a tease you are, Gypsy:)) Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Haha....
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy