A diamond's worth
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Comment from Begin Again
It looks like a hair ...oops hare...might have gotten in the way! Cute! I see you have recently joined Fanstory. May I welcome you and say I hope you enjoy the site. Happy writing!
Smiles, Carol
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It looks like a hair ...oops hare...might have gotten in the way! Cute! I see you have recently joined Fanstory. May I welcome you and say I hope you enjoy the site. Happy writing!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, A Diamond's Worth, has the proper formatting and makes the funny word play between "carats" of a gem and the food a rabbit would like. .........
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This 5-7-5, A Diamond's Worth, has the proper formatting and makes the funny word play between "carats" of a gem and the food a rabbit would like. .........
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
That was a good play on words you came up with. Carrots versus carats.
Hares would care if there were carrots there. The eating kind that is The diamond doesn't miss its carats as the people that want the carats to be bigger are usually selfish and greedy
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
That was a good play on words you came up with. Carrots versus carats.
Hares would care if there were carrots there. The eating kind that is The diamond doesn't miss its carats as the people that want the carats to be bigger are usually selfish and greedy
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the feedback. Yeah I was going for a sharper inflection there at the end. As in a playful, Oh certainly not the little hares!