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I'm a lonely ....

a love poem

3 total reviews 
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I loved all of it. The picture was uplifting and hopeful. The style of the poetry was cleverly done. And, of course the writing was superb. I am glad I moved up here near my sisters, I'm having mucho pain now from all the necessary activity, but that will settle down once I am all moved in and organized.:-)
Karen

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    I appreciate that you found time to read my poem , I know how busy you are with the transfer.

    Sorry to hear you are in pain .. moving house is physically demanding ..

    Once you are settled and stop heaving , bending the pain will subside.

    Glad you enjoyed the topic and the rhyme.

Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This rictameter, I'm a Lonely..., has the proper formatting and sings the song of sensation. The world is okay with deep commitments and quick trysts, but perhaps a bit lacking in true friends with an understanding.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
    Never been in a relationship so no kids either.

    The only family life I had was with my parents and they have both passed away.


    I have one friend , Lucia.

    For me a friend is someone that is there for you in the good and BAD times.

    People often use the word fRIEND to freely and where it?s not warranted.

    I just voted for the Heart of Darkness and was not surprised to see I have no votes.

    I didn?t read the requirements thoroughly the first and last word were supposed to be the same. My entry should have been disqualified.


Comment from Pearl Edwards
Excellent
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A lovely Rictameter poem about someone seeking love that makes their heart sing. I enjoyed reading this, reminded me of first love. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
    It would be my first love. I?m not only gloomy but a loner by nature.

    I have pets they are my children.

    I?m glad you enjoyed the read.

    Alas !, I didn?t read the requirements thoroughly the first and last word were supposed to be the same. My entry should have been disqualified. Not surprised it has no votes.