Fast
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love the play on words in this sentence! It's clever how you used "fast" in two different contexts, creating a fun and engaging line. The contrast between the runner's physical speed and his period of abstinence adds an interesting layer of meaning. Well done!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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I love the play on words in this sentence! It's clever how you used "fast" in two different contexts, creating a fun and engaging line. The contrast between the runner's physical speed and his period of abstinence adds an interesting layer of meaning. Well done!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Bill Schott
That was fast!
This antanaclasis sentence, Pepto-Bismol, doesn't seem to give an example of the word, BP, used in two different ways. It seems to be Pepto-Bismol in both appearances.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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That was fast!
This antanaclasis sentence, Pepto-Bismol, doesn't seem to give an example of the word, BP, used in two different ways. It seems to be Pepto-Bismol in both appearances.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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I have changed the sentence. Can you please revise it and is good enough for a five star rating? Do you have any suggestions?
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Pepto-Bismol will never work as your word. It is always the proper noun.
Here are some quick terms:
quick= fast / quick = sensitive area
He was quick to hurt me to the quick.
fast = speedy / fast = not eating
He runner became fast after his four-day fast.
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I have done what you have suggested and I agree with you. Can you please revive it and is it now good enough for a five star rating? Thank you for your help!
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Thank you so much!