The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, I'm trying to keep up best I can from the road and I'm enjoying every line that I read. I don't know if this is your best story yet or not as they have all been great to me. But it's darn sure outstanding in every way. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Yes, I'm trying to keep up best I can from the road and I'm enjoying every line that I read. I don't know if this is your best story yet or not as they have all been great to me. But it's darn sure outstanding in every way. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Hey, hi there. This is a surprise. I never thought to hear from you because you said another week. I feel so special now. Thanks so much for taking the time to read another chapter. You ar the best. It's different than any of my other stories and maybe that's why I think it's better...nothing to compare it too. LOl Hope you are staying safe and all is going well.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
So, now you are bringing more demons into the battle. Will it ever end? Just kidding. It's a marvelous and exciting story. I am waiting anxiously for them to find the treasure without getting killed.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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So, now you are bringing more demons into the battle. Will it ever end? Just kidding. It's a marvelous and exciting story. I am waiting anxiously for them to find the treasure without getting killed.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Probably not! Just tossed the thought in there for good measure. LOL Thanks again.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is certainly not an easy or simple treasure to find. I'm not sure what could be better than the "treasure" they offered the bad guys. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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This is certainly not an easy or simple treasure to find. I'm not sure what could be better than the "treasure" they offered the bad guys. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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It's all there, CArol. Finished writing the last chapter and it will be posted tomorrow. I believe you have three to go. Hope you enjoy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, this is a great continuation, but I have to say you had me frightened when they fell down when the steps collapsed. Now, they are doing okay and the others have found another way down to them. A big hug, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Hi Carol, this is a great continuation, but I have to say you had me frightened when they fell down when the steps collapsed. Now, they are doing okay and the others have found another way down to them. A big hug, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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I hope you love the last three chapters as much as I do. I started writing in the middle of the night and couldn't stop until the story was ended. I'm thrilled with the outcome and hope my readers are too.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Thanks for always giving us strong women. I can count on the fact that when one of the men "suggest" the ladies ought to wait in safety they'll be up and moving!
And soon we will learn the essence of the treasure...
Could it be?
Do they realize that each of them has found so much by coalescing and working together, mortals and spirits?
I'm guessing Sebastian will play an important part in this as you begin to wrap this wonderful book up!
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thanks for always giving us strong women. I can count on the fact that when one of the men "suggest" the ladies ought to wait in safety they'll be up and moving!
And soon we will learn the essence of the treasure...
Could it be?
Do they realize that each of them has found so much by coalescing and working together, mortals and spirits?
I'm guessing Sebastian will play an important part in this as you begin to wrap this wonderful book up!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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I've finished the book and I don't know whether to be sad or happy. It took three chapters. One I posted, the second one I will post this afternoon and the ending will be on Sunday. I've been writing almost all night and I am definitely in love with the story. I hope you are as thrilled with it as I am.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Oh! I too have mixed emotions. I'm thrilled you've completed it, but it will be difficult to let go of the characters!
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I even wrote the prologue and first chapter of the new story today. LOL And guess what...there just might be a ghost.... I am hooked. Lovee ya...
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Can I assume your muse has a room in hour home and never leaves? (smile)
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When I get rolling...especially when I am feeling upbeat, the stories just start rolling out. I couldn't believe how much I wrote last night and today. Matt thought I'd lost my mind.....Guess what? He found out this morning that he won Best Director in a Feature Movie at the New York film festive. Also won two other rewards too but he was stoked for the Best Director. He's won there before for smaller movies but this is his big one. I'm a proud mama.
Love ya, Carol
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That is HUGE for Matt! Congratulations to him and to his proud mama!
Comment from lyenochka
Well, I'm hoping there won't be any more demons. But the team is really connected with one another including the new blossoming relationship between Michael and Sandra, so they should be able to take on anything. I liked the creativity of the use of the sword as a "key" and all the great descriptions of the sights and smells of this interesting bowels of the mansion.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Well, I'm hoping there won't be any more demons. But the team is really connected with one another including the new blossoming relationship between Michael and Sandra, so they should be able to take on anything. I liked the creativity of the use of the sword as a "key" and all the great descriptions of the sights and smells of this interesting bowels of the mansion.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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No more demons.... All the bad guys are locked up or sent to live with the devil, I think. And Michael and SAndra might have a bright future blossoming in front of them. Thanks for enjoying the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
They are now so close, and they are all working as a team, caring for and protecting each other. I wonder what the treasure is - a lot of earthly treasure has already been removed. Will they now all value earthly treasure anyway? Just wondering ... Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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They are now so close, and they are all working as a team, caring for and protecting each other. I wonder what the treasure is - a lot of earthly treasure has already been removed. Will they now all value earthly treasure anyway? Just wondering ... Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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I think they have learned many lessons from this adventure hunt of theirs...how to appreciate others and work together through thick and thin. I think that's a special part of their redemption that they will learn.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
The entire group, ghosts and mortals, have come together for one common cause. They have suffered through a lot together. In the end, they will all be rewarded, but in different ways. The ghosts will receive redemption. Jack and Michael will be credited with bringing down the mob. Michael and Sandra may become a couple. Madeline will know that Noah is always with her. But I can't wait to see how you describe the redemption, and how they all separate in the end. (Take your time. I'm loving this).
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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The entire group, ghosts and mortals, have come together for one common cause. They have suffered through a lot together. In the end, they will all be rewarded, but in different ways. The ghosts will receive redemption. Jack and Michael will be credited with bringing down the mob. Michael and Sandra may become a couple. Madeline will know that Noah is always with her. But I can't wait to see how you describe the redemption, and how they all separate in the end. (Take your time. I'm loving this).
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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You've got three more chapters filled with all sorts of emotions. I hope I did the story justice with the ending. Thanks so much for being so supportive, Lorraine.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Poor Sandra falls, but in her own words she said she wasn't hut much, the believe the treasure is being guarded by demons, as if they needed more encounters with enemies, having faced crooks and demons before, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Poor Sandra falls, but in her own words she said she wasn't hut much, the believe the treasure is being guarded by demons, as if they needed more encounters with enemies, having faced crooks and demons before, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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I think they are worrying a bit too much but one never knows. And SAndra is young, she'll heal quickly compared to our old bones. LOL Thanks so much Roy!
Smiles, Carol
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That?s true
Comment from Teri7
Carol this is a really great chapter, full of suspense and adventure. You used great dialogue and very good descriptive words. I always feel like I am right there in the story when I am reviewing it. Great job my friend. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Carol this is a really great chapter, full of suspense and adventure. You used great dialogue and very good descriptive words. I always feel like I am right there in the story when I am reviewing it. Great job my friend. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Teri...Sorry for the delay in answering, but I've been busy wrapping up the novel. It's finished and you have three more chapters to go. Happy reading!
Smiles, Carol