Out Of The Frying Pan
A drug deal goes drastically wrong.2 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Good premise. Well written. Vivid protagonist. Well thought out theme. Everything nicely wrapped up at the ending. Lances shadiness got him killed
Here become of him
" Lance of what would come of him if he failed to deliver"
I enjoyed reading your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Good premise. Well written. Vivid protagonist. Well thought out theme. Everything nicely wrapped up at the ending. Lances shadiness got him killed
Here become of him
" Lance of what would come of him if he failed to deliver"
I enjoyed reading your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the strong review. I had fun with this one, it was a fun prompt to follow through on.
Comment from Earl Corp
Very nice job with the prompt. You were able to build up enough suspense to keep the reader right up until the end. Thank you for sharing good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Very nice job with the prompt. You were able to build up enough suspense to keep the reader right up until the end. Thank you for sharing good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you for this positive review Earl, I'm happy you enjoyed this story. Just a quick little on I threw together, this was a fun prompt to work with.