2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Thinking About You"*
5 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very sensual and passionate poem. It reminds me of the song "Slow Hand' by the Pointer Sisters. I think others have recorded the song too, but ...
"As the midnight moon, was drifting through
The lazy sway of the trees
I saw the look in your eyes, lookin' into mine
Seeing what you wanted to see
Darlin', don't say a word, 'cause I already heard
What your body's sayin' to mine
I'm tired of fast moves
I've got a slow groove
On my mind
I want a man with a slow hand
I want a lover with an easy touch
I want somebody who will spend some time
Not come and go in a heated rush
I want somebody who will understand
When it comes to love, I want a slow hand"
YES!!!!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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This is a very sensual and passionate poem. It reminds me of the song "Slow Hand' by the Pointer Sisters. I think others have recorded the song too, but ...
"As the midnight moon, was drifting through
The lazy sway of the trees
I saw the look in your eyes, lookin' into mine
Seeing what you wanted to see
Darlin', don't say a word, 'cause I already heard
What your body's sayin' to mine
I'm tired of fast moves
I've got a slow groove
On my mind
I want a man with a slow hand
I want a lover with an easy touch
I want somebody who will spend some time
Not come and go in a heated rush
I want somebody who will understand
When it comes to love, I want a slow hand"
YES!!!!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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thank you very much, Barbara, I can see why the poem reminded you of the song.
gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Sounds a little scary! What are they doing by a creek so late at night? Within a safe and comfy home sounds better to me. But I'm not that sultry fairy surrounded by fireflies. Lol.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Sounds a little scary! What are they doing by a creek so late at night? Within a safe and comfy home sounds better to me. But I'm not that sultry fairy surrounded by fireflies. Lol.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Haha.... it wasn't supposed to be a fairy, I changed it. Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
MariVal
Comment from karenina
Whew! This is steamy in the best possible way! I love your final line...
It's an invitation to a place called love, presented as only you can finesse!
Karenina
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Whew! This is steamy in the best possible way! I love your final line...
It's an invitation to a place called love, presented as only you can finesse!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Karen, I appreciate your excellent and kind review. Happy 4th of July!
MariVal hugs
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Thanks.
It's a quiet day at home... thunderstorms and traffic!
Comment from shelley kaye
cool tanka
i like the imagery of going slow because we have all night...
perfect pics and colours bring the smooth flow of words to life
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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cool tanka
i like the imagery of going slow because we have all night...
perfect pics and colours bring the smooth flow of words to life
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
It's a great post Gypsy, and as always has your unique stamp on it, and it is beautifully presented, neat and tidy as al your creative work is, well done my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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It's a great post Gypsy, and as always has your unique stamp on it, and it is beautifully presented, neat and tidy as al your creative work is, well done my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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Well done