2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "Field of Dreams"*
9 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
Beautiful exotic artwork that is fittingly represented in your creative tanka. Both expand the reader's imagination. You have a real talent for doing this, MariVal. I have a question. I associate northern wind with the cold of winter and this is a poem of spring. So is there a message here that I haven't picked up?
Blessings, Cheryl
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Beautiful exotic artwork that is fittingly represented in your creative tanka. Both expand the reader's imagination. You have a real talent for doing this, MariVal. I have a question. I associate northern wind with the cold of winter and this is a poem of spring. So is there a message here that I haven't picked up?
Blessings, Cheryl
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Cheryl. You are right about the wind, I charged it.
Gypsy
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Very striking images are conjured up here in this quasi-mystical tanka. It evokes color and motion and E-motions, too in a most mesmerizing of ways. And again - so sorry to be repetitive about this with every review I write, but it factors in in such a big way, I cannot exclude it - the artwork is exquisite. Another gorgeous job by the master of the Japanese Poetry art form!! Thank you for this special offering! xo
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Very striking images are conjured up here in this quasi-mystical tanka. It evokes color and motion and E-motions, too in a most mesmerizing of ways. And again - so sorry to be repetitive about this with every review I write, but it factors in in such a big way, I cannot exclude it - the artwork is exquisite. Another gorgeous job by the master of the Japanese Poetry art form!! Thank you for this special offering! xo
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle, I appreciate ALL the wonderful reviews. Thank you for going through my past poems. You are fabulous.
Gypsy ❤️
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No, Gypsy; it's YOU who are fabulous...which is why I love going through your older poems, too. They're all works of art!!
Comment from Neonewman
Should create a book out of these beautiful works. Just saying!
I would imagine your work has been reviewed by many, and rightfully so.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Should create a book out of these beautiful works. Just saying!
I would imagine your work has been reviewed by many, and rightfully so.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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I have two published books and many books in progress in fanstory. I just don't have the time.
Thank you very much, Steve.
Gypsy
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Yeah! Time is something most of us lack. I work 12-plus hours a day.
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Wow that's a lot 😞
Comment from lyenochka
Sounds like a dreamlike heroine - or a fantasy character or the personification of nature or of summer. Lovely presentation with all the vibrant colors!
Praying for Atticus!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Sounds like a dreamlike heroine - or a fantasy character or the personification of nature or of summer. Lovely presentation with all the vibrant colors!
Praying for Atticus!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you, big sister, Atticus is doing better. Kids are so resilient.
The poem can be about any of the ones you mentioned. Thank you very much, big sister.
Love,
Marival ❤️
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That is a long time for a little one to be sick! It's usually a 24 hour flu. But I guess that one was a more virulent bug. Hope they all get to enjoy the rest of their vacation! 💞🙏💖
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I think is a virus because we all had it but he had it worse, probably because he is little. He is feeling good today but nights get worse, we'll see tonight.
Thank you for checking.
Love,
Marival ❤️
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I love the image of this beautiful lady with her tousled black hair blending with her floral gown into the field of dreams as though they become as one. Beautifully presented with the test colours picking up the hues of the meadow. Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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I love the image of this beautiful lady with her tousled black hair blending with her floral gown into the field of dreams as though they become as one. Beautifully presented with the test colours picking up the hues of the meadow. Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
and if you build it, he will come... LOL!
beautifully imagistic tanka with smooth flow
cool pics and colours, too -- nice.
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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and if you build it, he will come... LOL!
beautifully imagistic tanka with smooth flow
cool pics and colours, too -- nice.
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from Colorado Owl
Your lovely poem is a pleasure to read and the picture is gorgeous. Did you create both? Great talent. I look forward to reading more. Very well done!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Your lovely poem is a pleasure to read and the picture is gorgeous. Did you create both? Great talent. I look forward to reading more. Very well done!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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I create everything in my posts, poem and presentation.
Thank you very much, Colorado Owl
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
You always manage to paint a great picture with words, art takes many forms, and you've mastered the art of words so well, particularly with the short forms, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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You always manage to paint a great picture with words, art takes many forms, and you've mastered the art of words so well, particularly with the short forms, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
When I hear the term 'Field of Dreams', I immediately think of the baseball movie starring Kevin Costner. Not the same as this field of dreams, but both had dreams. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and artwork with us.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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When I hear the term 'Field of Dreams', I immediately think of the baseball movie starring Kevin Costner. Not the same as this field of dreams, but both had dreams. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and artwork with us.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Yes, other reviewers thought about that movie too but the poem is not based on the movie. I love Kevin Costner, even in his sixties he is sexy. :)
Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy