Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Ahhhh! I LOVE this one!! It's spot on, and wonderful advice. Plus, that pic you found to accentuate your wise words is perfect, too. I bet I'm going to see this one in the Winner's Circle!! Good luck, Mystery Poet! xo

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024

Thank you for the great review, Rachelle. I actually created this picture myself. Someone was telling me about an eagle picking up a goat and figured I go way overboard and make one carrying an elephant off. Lol. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Thank you again for the great review and for the good luck wishes. Have yourself a great rest of your 4th.

reply by Rachelle Allen on 05-Jul-2024

I love that you can do that. Very impressive, indeed!! xo

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This 3-5-3 poem was fun and inspiring! You got the syllable count right, and the picture really helped the message "hammer home." Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024

Thank you for the great review, Jessi. I actually created the picture myself. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a great rest of your day.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very well written 353 poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely day. The message of this poem is so spot on and I enjoyed listening to it. We should all live out our dreams.Patricia.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024

Yes, we should. Thank you so much for the kind review and generous stars, Patricia. I'm glad you liked this little piece.