Bath time Bliss
30 syllables6 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Lovely! This really gets me in the mood for a bath. All those soothing soap suds and skilful alliteration help to make the experience an excellent one. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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Lovely! This really gets me in the mood for a bath. All those soothing soap suds and skilful alliteration help to make the experience an excellent one. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem captures the experience of bathing so well. The use of alliteration with "slippery suds" and "soaking serenity" was great. It makes the act of bathing feel almost luxurious! It's a unique poem that celebrates the simple pleasure of cleanliness and comfort. Well done!
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Your poem captures the experience of bathing so well. The use of alliteration with "slippery suds" and "soaking serenity" was great. It makes the act of bathing feel almost luxurious! It's a unique poem that celebrates the simple pleasure of cleanliness and comfort. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
Comment from jessizero
It looks like you got the syllable count perfect for this writing prompt, and your poem was relaxing. It made me want a hot bath! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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It looks like you got the syllable count perfect for this writing prompt, and your poem was relaxing. It made me want a hot bath! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
Comment from patcelaw
Is very well written for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely day, a wonderful week and a terrific month. Patricia.
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Is very well written for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely day, a wonderful week and a terrific month. Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
Comment from BermyBye50
This is an excellent entry in the 30 syllable contest. Your words paint a beautiful picture of the simplicity of a welcomed refreshing soak in a warm bath and sensation of feeling clean.
All the best in the contest,
BermyBye50
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This is an excellent entry in the 30 syllable contest. Your words paint a beautiful picture of the simplicity of a welcomed refreshing soak in a warm bath and sensation of feeling clean.
All the best in the contest,
BermyBye50
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
Comment from Colorado Owl
Now I want to take a bath, surrounded in those slippery suds! (I love alliteration.) This was fun to read, and you chose the perfect picture. Thank you.
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Now I want to take a bath, surrounded in those slippery suds! (I love alliteration.) This was fun to read, and you chose the perfect picture. Thank you.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024