2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Winds of Change"*
5 total reviews
Comment from RJ Heritage
In my mind, I don't take the love here, as a person, but rather love as, the quality and emotion, that has been tossed about and taken for granted. Many times, we experience the feeling that our given love has to change in order to survive the storms that are upon it.
Nice presentation,
RJ
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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In my mind, I don't take the love here, as a person, but rather love as, the quality and emotion, that has been tossed about and taken for granted. Many times, we experience the feeling that our given love has to change in order to survive the storms that are upon it.
Nice presentation,
RJ
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You?re welcome
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
Your poem makes me think of Jesus walking on the waters and we don't have to worry about the turbulent storms in our lives because He is with us "caressing our souls." Beautiful!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Your poem makes me think of Jesus walking on the waters and we don't have to worry about the turbulent storms in our lives because He is with us "caressing our souls." Beautiful!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Yes, it's about Jesus. I'm happy you like it. He is always there for us during good and bad times.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
like the touch of rhyme in the fourth line and how it caresses the soul
this kinda reminds me of the footprints story...
it's calming and peaceful with a cool pic
nice shades of blue, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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like the touch of rhyme in the fourth line and how it caresses the soul
this kinda reminds me of the footprints story...
it's calming and peaceful with a cool pic
nice shades of blue, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
I don't know why, but this had an exotic flavor to me. I could see an Indian watching her brave ride off. Or a Hispanic woman saying goodbye to a soldier. The wind in their hair as the love of their life rides away. Gretchen
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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I don't know why, but this had an exotic flavor to me. I could see an Indian watching her brave ride off. Or a Hispanic woman saying goodbye to a soldier. The wind in their hair as the love of their life rides away. Gretchen
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Great interpretation... you have a wonderful imagination. Thank you for your excellent review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from karenina
"...tousle my hair here and there..." I love the way that falls upon my heart, and settles in. The winds of change often blow cold. Sometimes they are exactly what we need ~ although it doesn't feel that way at the moment!
Brilliant poem and presentation -- as always!
Karenina
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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"...tousle my hair here and there..." I love the way that falls upon my heart, and settles in. The winds of change often blow cold. Sometimes they are exactly what we need ~ although it doesn't feel that way at the moment!
Brilliant poem and presentation -- as always!
Karenina
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Karenina... it's good to hear from you. I hope everything is well.
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome! It's always better once I read one of your poems!